Reviews from

Note Cards flyer 2 RAAT

This is a flyer created using the computer

21 total reviews 
Comment from hapeIis


This is really great, love the perspective you've got in this.
1. Yes it did grab my attention
2. Very clear what is being advertised
3. yes I like the layout and presentation
4. IF iwere in the market for buying, yes. great work and very well presented, thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2006


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2006
    hapelis, thanks you for taking the time to look and then review this piece, much appreciated... take care and cheers... LvO
Comment from mcapp


1. Did the flyer grab your attentions; did it make you stop and look? Somewhat.
2. Is it clear what is being advertised? Yes.
3. Do you like the layout and presentation? No.
4. Did it make you consider buying? Somewhat.

I wouldn't get too fancy. It is difficult to see the designs that are layed down. It is the illustrations you are selling. That is what makes the product special.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2006


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2006
    mcapp, don't like the background? or the lettering, or the cards that are layed down, should they be more like the first flyer, all standing upright? Thank you for the time and the review really do appreciate the feed back... take care & Cheers... LvO
Comment from jandaly


This is really a wonderful flyer promoting your wonderful work of art!! I love the detail and the way you've laid it all out!! GREAT job!!
Jan :)

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2006


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2006
    jan, thank you for taking the time to look and to review this artfrom, much appreciated, have agreat day, & cheers... LvO
Comment from NIREartworks


1. yeah these ones grabbed my attention
2. yeah its a clear whats being advertised
3. yeah its fine
4. no, i dont really buy sketches

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2006


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2006
    Arks, thank you for the time and the review, hope all is well, much appreciated... cheers.. LvO
Comment from thirteenth


Nice job on this one. I think Rodeo should be centered, so we know its important. I also like these cards quite a lot, and am glad to see each of them well.

All of the information seems to be there now - well done persevering!

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2006


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2006
    thirteenth, thanks you for all your help in the past, thisa one is result of all your inputs and suggestions, really appreciated all the help... take care and cheers... LvO
Comment from redeemer


Very nicely done and yes to all of your questions. I really do not have any marketing background in art; but, I do think that you personally expressed your note cards and manner of selling very well. Thank you for sharing it with me.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2006


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2006
    redeermer, thank you for taking the time to look at and then review the flyer.. much appreciated... take care and cheers... LvO
Comment from sarnewfie


i think you did well on this one, though i still would like to see the bottom two better, that is your choice though! hey, maybe you will get a few sales from here!

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2006


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2006
    sarnewfie, i hope so, we'll see (maybe you'd like to be the first?). thanks for taking the time to looks at and then review this piece... take care, & cheers... LvO
Comment from Diamondeyes


Excellent! I love the wood grain on the background! Yes, it did most certainly grab my attention! Very clear as to what is being advertised! Excellent layout and presentation! Yes, I would consider buying it! I like this one the most! The writing and I really like the angle of the cards! Excellent job. Thank you so much for sharing this.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2006


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2006
    diamondeyes, Thank you for taking the time to look and evaluation, appraise, review this piece. Very much appreciated by me, take care and cheers? LvO

Comment from Gryphons Aerie


it did grab my eye probably because of the western look it has

it would do quite well in areas where there are rodeos such as arizona or texas

nice layout maybe you could use photoshop and place a sepia like overlay on top

to give it that old west look

everything is fine about them, but I would nt buy them no offense but I just dont get into rodeos :-)

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2006


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2006
    Gryphons Aerie, Thank you for taking the time to appraise, and review this piece. Very much appreciated by me, take care and cheers? LvO
Comment from faisoft


I like this note card a lot. The black and white color contrast is nicely done. The shadowing is well balanced. I think I see something similar before. Nice work.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2006


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2006
    faisoft, yep, this is me trying to sell my work. Thank you for taking the time to look and review this piece. Very much appreciated by me, take care and cheers? LvO