Apres le bain
A woman after her bath in all her feminine beauty35 total reviews
Comment from GaliaG
I do not know if after the bath,we, woman, are vulnerable or just every time we are nuked
excellent classic draw, it really reminds me of some painting for the Renaissance
thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
I do not know if after the bath,we, woman, are vulnerable or just every time we are nuked
excellent classic draw, it really reminds me of some painting for the Renaissance
thanks for sharing
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thank you Galia. I think that we are at our best, after the bath. But we, as women, are all beautiful.
Comment from refman
A well executed piece of art.You have a talent with a pencil.Very pleasing to the eye.Good use of light and shade.Nice tones and shading.Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
A well executed piece of art.You have a talent with a pencil.Very pleasing to the eye.Good use of light and shade.Nice tones and shading.Well done.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thank you so much Refman, for this truly fine critique.
Comment from Joelgraphuchin
Initial impact: Very delightful artwork
Creativity of presentation: black background is perfect to present the lady as focal point
Color Harmony: beautiful black and white
Center of Interest: focus on the her details in texture and design is good
Technical Excellence: beautiful angle
Well done
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
Initial impact: Very delightful artwork
Creativity of presentation: black background is perfect to present the lady as focal point
Color Harmony: beautiful black and white
Center of Interest: focus on the her details in texture and design is good
Technical Excellence: beautiful angle
Well done
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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This is an excellent critique, as you have broken down each element and explained your thoughts.
Comment from Sean T Phelan
Hi Linda!
I never associate Female ( or Male!) Beauty with vulnerability and therefore I can't honestly recognize such a concept in this fine looking drawing!
However I'm finding your new image to be very attractive and quite impressive,my friend! It's quite a pleasure to view!
~Sean
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
Hi Linda!
I never associate Female ( or Male!) Beauty with vulnerability and therefore I can't honestly recognize such a concept in this fine looking drawing!
However I'm finding your new image to be very attractive and quite impressive,my friend! It's quite a pleasure to view!
~Sean
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Sean, this was a truly difficult picture to draw, for some reason. I appreciate your review, and your opinion. It helps me so much to know what others are interpreting what I have drawn.
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That seems to be a very difficult angle to draw convincingly,Linda! I've done several 'back views' that,despite my best efforts, turned out looking HORRIBLE! :D
Comment from bizzygirl
I love the pose from the back focusing on the upper back and nape of the neck. The strand of hair gives a lovely focal point The folds of the towel are very very good. Her attitude is vulnerable, you achieved your purpose I especially like the woven bun of her hair. The hint of an ear angle of the face together with the other things I mentions make this an outstanding drawing. I love it (somehow reminds me of the master from the Renaissance period)
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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
I love the pose from the back focusing on the upper back and nape of the neck. The strand of hair gives a lovely focal point The folds of the towel are very very good. Her attitude is vulnerable, you achieved your purpose I especially like the woven bun of her hair. The hint of an ear angle of the face together with the other things I mentions make this an outstanding drawing. I love it (somehow reminds me of the master from the Renaissance period)
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Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Hey Bizzy Girl. you have focused so eloquently on my work. Your review is spot on. Thank you for your interpretation and your thoughts.