Comment from Raoul D'Harmental
Hi Anon

I like the half and half apron in this image which seems to reveal a layer of depth in this sorrowful character. She looks like she's suffering for her art! :) Good luck in the contest. R

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2017

Ha ha ha. Don?t we all from time to time. Perhaps I unknowingly imbued my suffering at trying something new and worrying it wouldn?t work ou. Thanks so much.

Comment from Browncat
So creative and full of zest! I love the patterns and colors, especially her hair. Only one item is very distracting to me---the large pocket on her apron. It is to dominant that it competes with her beautiful eyes.

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 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017

Thank you so much. It looked to plain without it but I probably should have made it smaller. Too late now because of the mediums used but I?ll keep it in mind next time I try an abstract.