Eternal Beauty
This is a 24 by 36 oil painting on canvas.26 total reviews
Comment from Trajan
Nicely done oil painting this.
The shading and brushwork is quite lovely.
The composition looks pretty good, but a little heavy (too much blank space) towards the top.
The rendering is a little stiff in terms of her posture, but overall its a really nice effort and quite beautiful.
Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Nicely done oil painting this.
The shading and brushwork is quite lovely.
The composition looks pretty good, but a little heavy (too much blank space) towards the top.
The rendering is a little stiff in terms of her posture, but overall its a really nice effort and quite beautiful.
Well done.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your five star vote and your pointed critique. I appreciate it.
Comment from a.samathasena
What an eye catching great traditional art.Beautiful artistic drawing scene.Very Nice presentation.The Lady,face eyes action and body details,body shape and skin tone,b/g is very nice.Light and color balance,color blending are very nice. Very nice talent perfect work.Creativity color are excellent.Well Done.Thanks.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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What an eye catching great traditional art.Beautiful artistic drawing scene.Very Nice presentation.The Lady,face eyes action and body details,body shape and skin tone,b/g is very nice.Light and color balance,color blending are very nice. Very nice talent perfect work.Creativity color are excellent.Well Done.Thanks.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your five star vote and your comments.
Comment from TBI John
It's a very nice piece of art .
Excellent composition .
Anatomical she is outstanding , not an easy task .
I do love the background .
The highlights and shading are spot on .
It's a very cool piece and good luck.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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It's a very nice piece of art .
Excellent composition .
Anatomical she is outstanding , not an easy task .
I do love the background .
The highlights and shading are spot on .
It's a very cool piece and good luck.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Thank you very much for your six star vote and your comments. I originally had some doubts about doing the background in this manner but decided to try it anyway.
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You are most welcome
Comment from Isidoro Perez III
The artist has done great with the subject matter. She is drawn well proportioned. The color theme is quite interesting. The shading is perfect.
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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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The artist has done great with the subject matter. She is drawn well proportioned. The color theme is quite interesting. The shading is perfect.
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your 4.5 star vote and your comments. But, I am curious. What needs to be worked on that you see that I didn't? I would truly like to know so I may improve.
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the rendering is well done. but the composition of the figure does'nt cause the eyes to flow in the the focal point and out of the rendering. The color of the subjects hair matches too close to the color of the background so when you see the picture from the distance you can't tell where the hair ends and the back ground begins. the yellow carpet doesn't add to the design instead causes the eyes to fight for attention with the red in the background and the pale skin of the subject. dark colors draw the eyes into the rendering while light colors like yellow causes the subject to pop out. by having the pale skin and the yellow carpet doesn't allow the attention flow thought out the rendering.
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Thank you for your comments. I appreciate it. I will consider what you have said with the next one I produce.
Comment from karen zima
Great initial impact and contest entry. The position of the woman shows her muscle tone and form very well and makes for a great composition. Your body proportions are spot on. The shading and tones in the skin are very good. The background color is very relaxing and highlights the subject very well. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Great initial impact and contest entry. The position of the woman shows her muscle tone and form very well and makes for a great composition. Your body proportions are spot on. The shading and tones in the skin are very good. The background color is very relaxing and highlights the subject very well. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your five star vote and your comments.
Comment from npeavy13
Your work is outstanding you have an amazing gift. The details, the colors, and the shading really bring this work together. Thank you for creating a beautiful piece.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Your work is outstanding you have an amazing gift. The details, the colors, and the shading really bring this work together. Thank you for creating a beautiful piece.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your six star vote and your comments. You honor me. Yes, I have been told many times before I have the gift and I work at keeping it respectful and honorable absent malice or hateful presentation.
Comment from seshadri_sreenivasan
A superb rendering in oil which flatters the female form with exquisite curves and lines. Skillful finish and superb interplay of light and shadows. I think this is a strong contender for the contest. Keep them coming. Good luck!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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A superb rendering in oil which flatters the female form with exquisite curves and lines. Skillful finish and superb interplay of light and shadows. I think this is a strong contender for the contest. Keep them coming. Good luck!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your five star vote and very much for your comments.
Comment from Linda Wetzel
I wish I had six stars left. Thank you for your notes on how you created this magnificent painting of a most beautiful human form. Your background does enhance your drawing as well as allow your figure to take the spotlight. You should be very pleased with your success on this piece.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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I wish I had six stars left. Thank you for your notes on how you created this magnificent painting of a most beautiful human form. Your background does enhance your drawing as well as allow your figure to take the spotlight. You should be very pleased with your success on this piece.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your five star vote and your comments. Yes, I am pleased with it, for now. Killed a few brain cells on this one. When I grow some more back I will decide what I want to do next.
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Comment from GaliaG
Wow, amazing paint of the woman body
excellent technique, creativity and initial impact
good composition and presentation
thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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Wow, amazing paint of the woman body
excellent technique, creativity and initial impact
good composition and presentation
thanks for sharing
Comment Written 30-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your five star vote and your comments.
Comment from Raoul D'Harmental
Hi Anon
Wow. The lighting in this is brilliant as it centres on the core of the languorous woman reclining. Beautiful entry into the contest and I wish you all the best. R
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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Hi Anon
Wow. The lighting in this is brilliant as it centres on the core of the languorous woman reclining. Beautiful entry into the contest and I wish you all the best. R
Comment Written 30-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your five star vote and for your comments. Glad you noticed my intent to have more light in the center area than on each end of the form.
