Harmony
Sketch of a young woman15 total reviews
Comment from BloomingAvalon
Considering that you draw by memory I think that the work is done very well.
I like that smile looks very natural, this is not easy to achieve. I like how you done hair, like a general form, not going into details so much.
What I would recommend to improve is construction of the head.Now eyes look a bit flat,because eye lids are of the same width. But in reality this width varies depending on the angle. I would also add some values under the eye brows,nose and lower lip. Because these planes are opposite to cheeks and forehead.
Despite mentioned above, I like her smile and overall mood of the picture. I hope you continue doing your studies
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Considering that you draw by memory I think that the work is done very well.
I like that smile looks very natural, this is not easy to achieve. I like how you done hair, like a general form, not going into details so much.
What I would recommend to improve is construction of the head.Now eyes look a bit flat,because eye lids are of the same width. But in reality this width varies depending on the angle. I would also add some values under the eye brows,nose and lower lip. Because these planes are opposite to cheeks and forehead.
Despite mentioned above, I like her smile and overall mood of the picture. I hope you continue doing your studies
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Thank you for all your advice and tips. Much appreciated.
Comment from jesuel
What a great drawing the shading is done well I like her smile it was rendered well good job with the eyes love how you did the check muscles fine work here
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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What a great drawing the shading is done well I like her smile it was rendered well good job with the eyes love how you did the check muscles fine work here
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much
Comment from bpellephoto
Isn't that what art is all about? Giving light and form to ones thoughts.
I see a face with a happy and content continence. Bright strong eyes equally proportioned and set accurately on the face.
I see a head full of hair drawn with a lot of detail and form.
From memory - that is how all the great master artist created some of their finest work ... B-)) Bob
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Isn't that what art is all about? Giving light and form to ones thoughts.
I see a face with a happy and content continence. Bright strong eyes equally proportioned and set accurately on the face.
I see a head full of hair drawn with a lot of detail and form.
From memory - that is how all the great master artist created some of their finest work ... B-)) Bob
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thanks Bob. :). You always know what to say.
Comment from booklotto
Another great picture, your great and this is real good, so do more! Love her smile and those teeth. The eyes are a dream. Perfect hair curls. Love the color here, Well done! Thanks for sharing,
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Another great picture, your great and this is real good, so do more! Love her smile and those teeth. The eyes are a dream. Perfect hair curls. Love the color here, Well done! Thanks for sharing,
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Sean T Phelan
Hello again Linda!
Your Memory Portrait of her looks pretty good as far as I'm concerned,Linda!
I'm not a good one to be offering critical comments on other artist's works of portraiture as my own portrait drawings are done in my own highly developed ( and not always 'pretty'! ) personal style ( which admittedly isn't to every viewer's liking! ) but you've definitely done well here,my friend!
'Good Show'! : )
~Sean
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Hello again Linda!
Your Memory Portrait of her looks pretty good as far as I'm concerned,Linda!
I'm not a good one to be offering critical comments on other artist's works of portraiture as my own portrait drawings are done in my own highly developed ( and not always 'pretty'! ) personal style ( which admittedly isn't to every viewer's liking! ) but you've definitely done well here,my friend!
'Good Show'! : )
~Sean
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you Sean
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You're very welcome,Linda!
Comment from Monica Morrell
This is a nice drawing. Nice technique to show off her wavy hair. Great smile and happy eyes. Nicely proportioned. The woman obviously made a lasting impression.
Nicely accomplished!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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This is a nice drawing. Nice technique to show off her wavy hair. Great smile and happy eyes. Nicely proportioned. The woman obviously made a lasting impression.
Nicely accomplished!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Thanks Monica
Comment from GaliaG
Very nicely done
excellent draw of her eyes and lovely smile
good composition, presentation and initial impact
thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Very nicely done
excellent draw of her eyes and lovely smile
good composition, presentation and initial impact
thanks for sharing
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thank you
Comment from Sange
Well she looks lovely and has kind eyes and a nice smile.
It's nice to see you continue to draw Linda.
You did well on her facial details as well as with her wavy hair.
Nicely done ;)
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Well she looks lovely and has kind eyes and a nice smile.
It's nice to see you continue to draw Linda.
You did well on her facial details as well as with her wavy hair.
Nicely done ;)
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thank you Sange
Comment from Vivian Shi
Beautiful portrait! Love the expression of the woman's face. You mentioned that this was drawn from memory, and it shows in the flatness of some of the facial features. Perhaps it would be best to have a reference photo, especially when working with portraiture where the smallest subtleties will change the whole piece. Overall a good sketch.
-Vivian
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Beautiful portrait! Love the expression of the woman's face. You mentioned that this was drawn from memory, and it shows in the flatness of some of the facial features. Perhaps it would be best to have a reference photo, especially when working with portraiture where the smallest subtleties will change the whole piece. Overall a good sketch.
-Vivian
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Swati Gayasen
A very lively sketch. Loved the way expressions have come out.in te sketch. However, if the background colour could be distinguished from face colour in my opinion it would have more impact.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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A very lively sketch. Loved the way expressions have come out.in te sketch. However, if the background colour could be distinguished from face colour in my opinion it would have more impact.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thank you