Well here is the new version as I understood the inputs to improve the previous one.

Dear members I have been working on a flyer to try and promote my new note cards of the images you have seen on this web site over the past months. Please take the time to let me know what you think by answering the 4 questions:
1. Did the flyer grab your attentions; did it make you stop and look?
2. Is it clear what is being advertised?
3. Do you like the layout and presentation?
4. Did it make you consider buying?
All inputs are welcome and needed before I send this out to the printers.
Thanks in advance for looking and commenting.