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Bold Aggressive Anger

just asimple pencil drawing

13 total reviews 
Comment from samandlancelot


Powerful expression you've created in your drawing. It seemed a perfect match for my poem, "Fury."

Thank you for making this available on FanStory.com

Patricia

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012
    samandlancelot,
    thank you for the review and compliments, glad to hear he was an insperation to you cheers!!!
Comment from skyseyes


I guess that would depend on that person situation at the time. I think I have definitely seen a bit of this in myself at time in my life. Thank you so much for sharing:

Iinitial Impact: 6
Creativity & Presentation: 5
Color Harmony: 5
Center of Interest: 5
Technical Excellence: 5
Technique: 5
Story Telling Ability: 5
Lighting: 5

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2010


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2010
    skyseyes,
    welcome you are, anger takes you to the dark side... and no joy it brings.
    Protect my identity I am, Dank u wel, in English; you I am thanking you, Enjoyed this image you did?thankful thoughts I have for your comments and I am tantalizing you and challengingand daring you I am by what little is show of the rest of the face to boldly go where no reviewer has gone before and help fill him in in you minds eye and your imagination... participate I am asking you to be. Closing with my thoughts; "Creative activity could be described as a type of learning process where teacher and pupil are located in the same individual." by Arthur Koestlermany
Comment from GaliaG


A real scary and very unpleasant face but an excellent draw with good details

good luck with the contest and thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2010


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2010
    GaliaG,
    welcome you are. scare you it does...becuase anger takes us to the dark side.
    Protect my identity I am, Dank u wel, in English; you I am thanking you, Enjoyed this image you did?thankful thoughts I have for your comments and I am tantalizing you and challengingand daring you I am by what little is show of the rest of the face to boldly go where no reviewer has gone before and help fill him in in you minds eye and your imagination... participate I am asking you to be. Closing with my thoughts; "Creative activity could be described as a type of learning process where teacher and pupil are located in the same individual." by Arthur Koestlermany
Comment from amazingb


ROAD RAGE....As a person who has had major problems with anger that actually have resulted in explosive outbursts I can see every bit of that emotional intensity in this composition. Thank you for posting this well composed study drawing of an angry person at large.
I have had anger management that caused me to have to look at this guy eye to eye...he was me.
Not anymore.
AmazingB

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2010


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2010
    amazingb,
    the dark side you have conquered... Yes?
    rotect my identity I am, Dank u wel, in English; you I am thanking you, Enjoyed this image you did?thankful thoughts I have for your comments and I am tantalizing you and challengingand daring you I am by what little is show of the rest of the face to boldly go where no reviewer has gone before and help fill him in in you minds eye and your imagination... participate I am asking you to be. Closing with my thoughts; "Creative activity could be described as a type of learning process where teacher and pupil are located in the same individual." by Arthur Koestlermany
Comment from Eric Liller


You captured anger and unattractive anger. shouting too. I can see it! Many details in the pencil drawing. This is very creative artwork. Thank you for sharing. Eric

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2010


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2010
    Eric Liller,
    welcome you are, appreciateive I am...
    Protect my identity I am, Dank u wel, in English; you I am thanking you, Enjoyed this image you did?thankful thoughts I have for your comments and I am tantalizing you and challengingand daring you I am by what little is show of the rest of the face to boldly go where no reviewer has gone before and help fill him in in you minds eye and your imagination... participate I am asking you to be. Closing with my thoughts; "Creative activity could be described as a type of learning process where teacher and pupil are located in the same individual." by Arthur Koestlermany
Comment from armymom


Good title choice, and you nailed it. Maybe if we all take a long look at this, we will not be as easy to lose our temper. Very expressive drawing, so realistic too, anger is ugly, You have drawn a nice visual of the inside anger that we may have,but the outside appearance we portray to others. Bravo, fantastic impact.Armymom

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2010


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2010
    ArmyMom,

    Protect my identity I am, Dank u wel, in English; you I am thanking you, Enjoyed this image you did?thankful thoughts I have for your comments and I am tantalizing you and challengingand daring you I am by what little is show of the rest of the face to boldly go where no reviewer has gone before and help fill him in in you minds eye and your imagination... participate I am asking you to be. Closing with my thoughts; "Creative activity could be described as a type of learning process where teacher and pupil are located in the same individual." by Arthur Koestlermany
Comment from Celia Claase


Initial impact - very good
Creativity of presentation - very good
Technique - Shading of the picture is creative.
Center of intererst - excellent
Story telling ability - this is really an image of anger and frustration you've managed to capture it.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2010


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2010
    Celai Claase. wow! you are really not liking it a third messaeg of not liking it... sorry you I am for your dislike and discomfort with this rnedering.
Comment from Celia Claase


Initial impact - very good
Creativity of presentation - very good
Shading of the picture is creative.
Center of intererst - excellent
Story telling ability - this is really an image of anger and frustration you've managed to capture it.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2010


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2010
    Celia Claase,
    I am getting it now another time line.. yes liking it you do not... but it is still the same as before...
reply by Celia Claase on 02-Apr-2010
    There was a problem on my computer for sending the message three times sorry. And don't be so offended for recieving four and a half stars, I never said I did not like it.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2010
    offended I'm not, all of my responses just playing with you a little. Offended did I sound? No... offended never, just wanted to understand what you are thinking could be improved with the sketch... are you not liking the part where you have to work to fill in the blank... wondering I am?
reply by Celia Claase on 02-Apr-2010
    LOL, artist you are.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2010
    Happy Easter to you and yours! Thanks for the compliment, pleased I am... fun I like to have... LOL is a good thing, good for the heart... keeps you young!!
Comment from Celia Claase


Initial impact - very good
Creativity of presentation - very good
Technique - Shading of the picture is creative.
Center of intererst - excellent
Story telling ability - this is really an image of anger and frustration you've managed to capture it.

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 Comment Written 02-Apr-2010


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2010
    Celai Claase,
    why you no like my drawing? not emotion it shows? Scares you it does?
    Protect my identity I am, Dank u wel, in English; you I am thanking you, Enjoyed this image you did?thankful thoughts I have for your comments and I am tantalizing you and challengingand daring you I am by what little is show of the rest of the face to boldly go where no reviewer has gone before and help fill him in in you minds eye and your imagination... participate I am asking you to be. Closing with my thoughts; "Creative activity could be described as a type of learning process where teacher and pupil are located in the same individual." by Arthur Koestlermany
Comment from seshadri_sreenivasan


This drawing is very well rendered. Lovely smooth lines, Fineness of the features well drawn, The shading is just fine. Overall a very good effort.


 Comment Written 02-Apr-2010


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2010
    seshadri_ sreebivasan
    Protect my identity I am, Danke Shon, Dank u wel, Yakk, Muchas Gracias, Obrigado, Grazie, and in English; you I am thanking, and hope you Enjoyed it you did? Closing with my thoughts; "For each petal on the shamrock, this brings a wish your way good health, good luck, and happiness, for today and every day.? Irish Blessing, given from me to you.