Collaboration Pieces with Mr Jones
Viewing comments for Page 2 "Exorcist Tribute"a selection of horror collabs
11 total reviews
Comment from Mr Jones
i think your side of the picture is truly awesome and so much like the characters in this classic horror. using high imagination, with the single use of colour (for the cuts) and drawing, very realistic and scary eyes, on the possessed face. i also love the numbers and letters, that you would find on a ouija (oui, french for yes and ja, german for yes) board and this very aspect, is vital to the story (based on true events). obviously you are a great fan of this film and i think you have done it real justice. thanks for all your time and effort, in this tribute to the greatest movie of all time.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2011
  |
i think your side of the picture is truly awesome and so much like the characters in this classic horror. using high imagination, with the single use of colour (for the cuts) and drawing, very realistic and scary eyes, on the possessed face. i also love the numbers and letters, that you would find on a ouija (oui, french for yes and ja, german for yes) board and this very aspect, is vital to the story (based on true events). obviously you are a great fan of this film and i think you have done it real justice. thanks for all your time and effort, in this tribute to the greatest movie of all time.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2011
-
Thanks Vincent, it seemed the most natural progression from where you were leading me to and I think we both summed up the movie to a tee. Looking forward to the next one, I dont think I could ever get bored of these, its a refreshing break from what I usually doodle. Cant wait to see how the next one turns out..
-
the more i look a this the more it grows on me. the A4 size is a bit restrictive but it's very cool.
Comment from andylouviere
It is a very nice first attempt. It makes me just want to do ours even more. I think we can match up better. I like the piece though. and it def has that creepy feeling to it so that works for me. Nice job
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2010
|
It is a very nice first attempt. It makes me just want to do ours even more. I think we can match up better. I like the piece though. and it def has that creepy feeling to it so that works for me. Nice job
Comment Written 29-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2010
-
Thanks, its a good start and will be starting the next one this weekend based on the texas chainsaw masacre, really excited about painting that one. I have decided I'm doing pastels for our one and I know exactly what to do when I get it, I think it will work great, cant wait to have a go at it. I think all artists should give this a go, would be great seeing different people work with each other. Its great fun!
Comment from Yojo
I like that your drawing looks like Linda Blair. However, it doesn't grab me at all. It reminds me of a school project. Sorry Corrina this is not my cup of tea.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2010
 |
I like that your drawing looks like Linda Blair. However, it doesn't grab me at all. It reminds me of a school project. Sorry Corrina this is not my cup of tea.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2010
-
Im so pleased you think she looks like her, I know this isn't everyones cup of the tea ;) Thanks for taking the time out to rate it.
-
Your welcome Corrina.
Comment from margas45
On a general viewing level this doesn't appeal to me, but I can see the artistic merit in the drawing of the different characters. It's certainly reminiscent of the movie. It's quite simplistic in style, but as it's the beginning of the project this may evolve into something more sophisticated. Good on you for experimenting and posting.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2010
  |
On a general viewing level this doesn't appeal to me, but I can see the artistic merit in the drawing of the different characters. It's certainly reminiscent of the movie. It's quite simplistic in style, but as it's the beginning of the project this may evolve into something more sophisticated. Good on you for experimenting and posting.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2010
-
Thanks Margaret, I appreciate you taking the time out to rate this. Its the very first part of my little experiment, who knows how it will evolve, could go horribly wrong or could turn out to be works of art... time will tell ;)
-
You are welcome! I'm sure it will be fine.
Comment from DIGYARTIST
neat idea- like telling a stor.a bit busy,eye doesn't quite know where to go.
odd numbers work better for composition and balance.piece is a little busy
When you do a collage, add new pieces with blur around them so they appear to blend more instead of paste on effect.
try piercing arrow right into skull of face its pointed at and then man for connection for more drama.
good luck
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2010
|
neat idea- like telling a stor.a bit busy,eye doesn't quite know where to go.
odd numbers work better for composition and balance.piece is a little busy
When you do a collage, add new pieces with blur around them so they appear to blend more instead of paste on effect.
try piercing arrow right into skull of face its pointed at and then man for connection for more drama.
good luck
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2010
-
Thanks so much for the input and taking the time to rate this. I have taken all comments from everyone on board and will put them into effect in the next one.
Comment from Shianne26
I was reading the rest of the comments on this one. I happen to agree with one comment, and want to expand on a thought. This would look outstanding if this were on a 6x10 canvas, and the extra characters were overlayed on top of main characters somehow. You would have more room to add the priest. In color would be even better. I think you have a great start to a growing project. Thank you for sharing this. All time favorite scary movie.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
|
I was reading the rest of the comments on this one. I happen to agree with one comment, and want to expand on a thought. This would look outstanding if this were on a 6x10 canvas, and the extra characters were overlayed on top of main characters somehow. You would have more room to add the priest. In color would be even better. I think you have a great start to a growing project. Thank you for sharing this. All time favorite scary movie.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
-
Thanks so much and I totally agree would look better in colour and more characters involved, will do more in the second piece. There is a bit of colour in this but the photo didnt pick it up, think I might paint the next one or do it in pastels. Thanks so much for the feedback
-
I can't wait. Make sure to email me when you have more work!!!!
-
Will do, just need to see if Mr Jones is up for a second piece... I hope so!
Comment from RagsAuggie
Interesting! I actually never saw the Exorcist! This collage reminds me of what I thought it would look like! Thanks for sharing! Cindy
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
|
Interesting! I actually never saw the Exorcist! This collage reminds me of what I thought it would look like! Thanks for sharing! Cindy
Comment Written 27-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
-
No way, you are missing out!! best horror film ever! thanks so much for reviewing this
Comment from virginian
Good artist notes. A five for putting this out here. Wouldn't hang it, but it jogs the memory of the movie. Maybe some overlaying would make it more eerie with some colors. Have fun.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
|
Good artist notes. A five for putting this out here. Wouldn't hang it, but it jogs the memory of the movie. Maybe some overlaying would make it more eerie with some colors. Have fun.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
-
lol thanks Judy, I was a little hesitant what with it being a little grim. I totally agree with the overlay and will try and incorporate that in the next piece
-
You are welcome. The overlay and spooky colors would be good.
Comment from jbravo46
Well, you accomplished what you set ou to do, That alone is worth a five. I do not know how to improve it or if it needs any. That makes it a 5. That being said, count me as one who would not hang it. Too macambre for me. But agail good job especially mixing it up with another artist.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
|
Well, you accomplished what you set ou to do, That alone is worth a five. I do not know how to improve it or if it needs any. That makes it a 5. That being said, count me as one who would not hang it. Too macambre for me. But agail good job especially mixing it up with another artist.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
-
Thank you for reviewing this seeing that its not your cup of tea, I really appreciate you doing that. Yes the whole fun was working with a different artist I hope he is willing to do another as I wouldn't mind expanding on this in colour and larger
Comment from silversobota
Initial impact 5
Story telling 5
Color 5
Center of interest 5
Composition 5
Focus 5
Lighting 5
Exposure 5
Very nice job done here thanks so much for sharing!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
|
Initial impact 5
Story telling 5
Color 5
Center of interest 5
Composition 5
Focus 5
Lighting 5
Exposure 5
Very nice job done here thanks so much for sharing!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2010
-
Thanks so much for the review, greatly appreciated