Comment from Sange
I know your client will be pleased with this drawing. It's colorful, creative and oh so SHARP! ;)
I LIKE the "dragon" like planes.
Fab work Dude!!

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020

thanks dudette for the great review.

Comment from Monica Morrell
Ha ha ha, this is great. I can feel the intensity. Great technique and execution. Great colors and interest. A fun view with your expert imagination and creativity. Excellent art work!

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020

Thanks for the great review

reply by Monica Morrell on 07-Dec-2020

Always a pleasure to see your work.

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020

Thank you

Comment from Brendaartwork18
Wow what a imagination. To use the planes in dragon form is very innovative and I love the idea. Red eyes flashing and a hint of feery fire of the red furked tongue. Cartoons allow so much imagery and boy have you got the skill of it. Excellent work. Bet your customer was chuffed.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020

thanks Brenda for the great review.

Comment from ChuckWaxman
Wonderful and inspiring. Did you get paid wink, wink;-)
Definitely deserves to be recognized. Great entry for the contest - good luck. Like your choice of colors - dimple but effective. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2020

Thanks Chuck for the great review

Comment from Crystal schultz
I can appreciate this piece for many reasons-beginning with the symbolism. What a great way to show how hard Fed-Ex employees work EVERY single day! With over 6 million packages shipped on the daily--they truly are knights in shining armor.
I think your ability to create works of art with just a sharpie and a bic pen is unique and you do it well.
keep up the good work!Slay those dragons!

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020

Well I have been working with this medium for a half century now. Btw welcome to FAR! I hope all your adventures is successful and look forward to seeing more of your work. If you get time look me up on YouTube. There will discover my numerous Music Cartoons. Some I have worked directly with the songwriter. Others I wish and they are just promos. If you don't go on YouTube you can find some of my music videos on my profile page. Thanks for the great review

Comment from Highfive
It's a terrible thing being on the defensive against a power opponent in large numbers. The mean angry eyes of the large planes in red stands out the most warning the viewer this is a very serious situation unfolding. Where the grey knight stands alone against many. Again nice uses of your sharpies. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020

I know you have been busy over the years. So it is an honor when you take the time to look at my lil ole cartoons. Thanks for the great review

Comment from kmoss
Amazing job!! I am a fan of dragons. I used one of your pieces for my poem on Fanstory. I love that this was the idea that you came up with for the person requesting it. It's fire!! (pun intended! lol)

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020

I'm a member of Fanstory as well. Glad ya liked and thanks for the awesome review.

Comment from Zilyram
Your imagination always amazes me and you have nailed the requirement for your paying customer - at least in my opinion you have - great detail in the repeating plane dragons. :)

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020

thanks for the great review.

Comment from Way West
Well done and congratulations! This is a great drawing that your client will love. The dragons are fierce and hysterical with their glowing eyes and your knight is unafraid with his sword up and shadow racing him to the fight! The details are fine, colors are bold and the message clear. Great work!

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020

thanks for the great review.

Comment from Pat Kulka
The FedEx man and his shadow are very nicely done, but the dragons (I guess) are very animated looking and don't look like dragons. What were the main "dragons" his staff was up against, I can't imagine it was white birds with red eyes. Sorry, but I just don't get it. I'm glad your customer does though.

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 Comment Written 04-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020

oh i can tell your a new member..lol. Pat let me help you in the rating 1st ok...the star ranking representing the follow...6 star excellent...5 stars great work..4 stars good work but the work need improvement..3 1/2 stars means it sucks and needs a lot of work..im not upset..;it just tells me that your the new kid on the block..oh btw..dont give anyone 1 star unless your ready to explain to administration why..if it is a stickmen drawing..at least give em 2 stars..lol. you may not be aware of this but Fed ex ships packages world wide thru air in their own planes out of Memphis,Tn. they have crews who work around the clock loading these planes. if you read the artist notes you would have discovered this is a commission piece by a Fed Ex employee from their corporate office for a retiring employee who was in charge of loading the planes. His favorite saying to his team is "Let's slay those Dragons" meaning lets get these planes loaded and shipped out on time. is it making sense now??..oh btw welcome to Fanartreview. (thumbs up)

reply by Pat Kulka on 05-Nov-2020

Thanks for the feedback, especially on the ratings. I I did read the artist notes, but I still don?t understand the white birds being used as dragons instead of dragons.Sorry

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020

Oic..read the artist notes..(thumbs up)