Comment from Eddie cioffi
Very nice, you are very good using photoshop, very interesting the way you Composed the art,
Very original, I've never seen anything like before.
So is it a poem or a painting I mean photoshop over the blue.
Sorry I don't understand

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021

I drew the spider and the fly as well as composed the poem (I wrote it for a young girl character to cite in one of my writings.) So I just created a page in photoshop and applied my two drawings and typed poem. Thanks.

Comment from Sean T Phelan
Cool!
I don't really care about the poem ( poetry simply 'isn't my thing'! ) but I'm enjoying the drawing very much!
What more can I say?
It's an interesting presentation,my friend!
~Sean

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021

Thanks, my friend. I wrote the poem originally in my true-story based novel, attributing it to a young girl of about 11 as she was poetic and I never realized it until much later.

reply by Sean T Phelan on 31-Jul-2021

Cool!

Comment from alaskapat
This is a well thought out piece , I like the way you arranged this with the fly in top right and spider in lower left. Both are well rendered, the poem works to connect the two.
I like the blue background .
Well presented! Best wishes to you in this contest!

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021

Thank you much, especially coming from such a fine photographer/artist as you.

Comment from michiganmike
A very nice poem that is the main part of this presentation. I think the drawing of the spider and the fly could be bigger and perhaps more personalized. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021

Thank you. I originally did the poem first and drew the fly and spider later. For this contest, I probably should have emphasized the spider even more.

Comment from liseworks
This is so cool,, great entry for this, different in so many aspects, such an old story that used to make me shudder as I am terrified of spiders. But this is so different, I like it

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021

Thanks, You are so kind.

Comment from MKFlood
its a cute presentation. the spider and bug forms is good. the font is good. the shading is good. the details is good. the depth is good. the creation is balanced and eye appealing to the viewer. creative approach and good job overall.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021

Thank you, fine artist, MKFlood.

reply by MKFlood on 30-Jul-2021

Thanks.. really I'm a cartoonist..wink.

Comment from jesuel
what a great piece of art the color composition is great the design is both creative and unique very commercial art and the wording is perfect fine work here

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021

Thank you, thank you so much.

Comment from Artistsushma
Interesting entry to the contest!! In my view, highly interesting!! Poetry with artistic illustrations is a brilliant combination!! And it makes this artwork so special!! I loved it in totality- best wishes for the contest

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021

Thank you, fine artist.