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Raw Bird

Learning to add color using colored pencils

2 total reviews 
Comment from nikman


A good looking image posted here into the competition! Your fine, full and appropriate composition offers us a very enjoyable view of your strange bird. Colours, textures and tones are fine. Well drawn and good luck!

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much.
Comment from soulfeeder


Your framing is a bit small for your bird with the biggest beak. You need to provide negative space for your subject to move and breath. I like the way that you have drawn its legs. You did not identify the kind of bird that you have drawn, so I am guessing that this is a Toco Toucan or the Rhinoceros Hornbill. Both of these birds that I have mentioned have the biggest beak. Maybe, you can use the real colors of the birds that you are presenting here. Usually, their colors are vibrant. Overall, I know that you can draw but it needs some improvement, both in the framing and in the coloring. Looking forward to see your next post.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2024