Comment from Ray Gordon
Welcome Ryleigh, I see fine depictions of human form gathered as couples and family groups and a stage. To be honest I don't see that the art work tells the story. I see the story explains the art work. Art is nonverbal communication and shouldn't need a lengthly explanation. The figurative gestural drawings are fairly good and are a fine entry. The best of luck in the contest. Ray

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024

Thank you!

Comment from Maureen Woychyshyn
A very interesting and unique visual presented here. Composition shades to an overall presentation is very well done. There was a lot going on in this visual. I would've liked to have seen it a little bit darker for viewing.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024

Thank you. It’s definitely originally darker in person, but u had to edit the photo and make it smaller due to the pixel requirements

Comment from Mark Lovegrove
Great pen and pencil drawing here and great story to go with it. The whole drawing is very well thought out and presented in a very skilled way. Love the many layers and textures and different kinds of people, the angel, the little girl and the dog. Welcome to FAR and thanks for sharing :-)

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024

Thank you so much!

Comment from nikman
A good looking image presented here into the competition! Your fine, full and appropriate composition suggests to me that I am viewing people at a ball, long ago? Well drawn and good luck!

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024

Thank you! Yes it is a ball a long time ago. And during different periods, such as rococo, all the way to the roaring 20s!