Comment from focaldot
Its a nice tighter composition and very suitable for the contest, I can see some artifacts, maybe cause of resizing it. she looks so innocent and the look in her eye is priceless, nice helpfull notes too, Wish you all the best for the contest.

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008

Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind comments and your good wishes very much. I probably will post other pictures of her in time:)

reply by focaldot on 14-Nov-2008

Sure, do that :) Welcome!

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008

I will :)

Comment from CammyCards
Perhaps this is even more expressive than the whole face would have been. The focus here is really on the expression in her eye... which looks wary and sad. I think it would have been a shame to clone out the scratch, which I assume is not due to abuse. Nice work.
CammyCards

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008

Thank you so much. I think so too. This version is the most expressive one. I'm so happy you like the scratch too. You are right it is not do to abuse but too playing in the jungle.

Comment from GaliaG
Beautiful photo of a beautiful girl.

Good lock with the contest

# Initial impact 5
# Creativity of presentation 5
# Color Harmony 5
# Center of Interest 5
# Technical Excellence 5
# Technique 5
# Story Telling Ability 5
# Lighting 5

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008

Thank you so much for your generous review and the good wishes.

Comment from saraaah
I like how this photograph is cropped. It brings interest to my eye, how you can only see a part of her nose and lips... and only one eye. Really nice. I think this photo would look neat black and white too, but it still looks appealing in colour

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 Comment Written 14-Nov-2008

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008

Thanks saraaah. I appreciate your generous review very much. Yes I think you are right with the black and white but I wanted to keep the beautiful color of the skin.

Comment from tallsasquatch
wow this is a good picture, i like how it is cropped on just her face. Great sharpness, and story . interesting that she may be part royalty, that would be cool

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008

Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind and generous review.

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008

Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind and generous review.

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008

Thank you. I appreciate your generous review very much.

Comment from Jorge Gaete
Beautiful capture.
The detail is very good.
The soft light helps to give a feeling of sweetness and dream like character.
She is so happy and proud her eye tell the story.
Great work.

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 Comment Written 14-Nov-2008

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008

Thank you so very much for your generous review.

reply by Jorge Gaete on 14-Nov-2008

You are very welcome it was my pleasure.

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008

:)