Comment from sandysartstudio
there is something about this drawing of lemons that just caught my eye. It is loose in style and got depth. Would look great on a dinnerset. Very nicely done with great depth. Sandy

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2010

sandysartstudio,
TYVM, very appreciative of you time and the comments in your review. pleased you like it... TA!

Comment from Eric Liller
initial impact. 5
creativity 5.5
color harmony 5
center of interest 5
technique 5
story telling ability 5.5
This is a good over all composition. thank you for sharing! eric

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 Comment Written 11-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2010

Eric,
Y are welcome.
TYVM, very appreciative of you time and the comments in your review. pleased you like the drawing, TA!

Comment from Mattison
The lemon in the front looks OK and maybe the leaf just right of that but I hate to say, a lot of this with the scribbling looks quite messy... As if it were rushed with mistakes scribbled out rather than starting over (mostly in the upper right hand corner.
I think just the center lemon with the leaf just to the right would have been simple and even enough.
I wish I could have given a better rating on this but I still like the center lemon.

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 Comment Written 11-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2010

Mattison,
TYVM, very appreciative of you time and the comments in your review, may not agree with them all, the URC no mistakes there, it's the style. but TA!