Comment from raineyknightartwork
Initial Perception: The little girl looks very thrilled to be there and the little boy - I am imagining what he is thinking - not another camera and picture....
Emotionally Charged: yes
Title: fits
Artist Notes: helpful and sharing
Creativity: challenging
Color Harmony: rich blue eyes from the peek out
Center of Interest: those face expressions
Technique (category): Correct
Story Telling Ability: Yes
What Works Well? Depth of field, focus, and subject
Comments: outstanding shot
Star Rating: 6+
Per site scale (6=Exceptional, 5.5=Professional, 5=Expert (no revisions necessary) 4.5=Above Average, 4=Average)

Thank you for sharing. Rainey

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010

thank you so much

reply by raineyknightartwork on 27-Oct-2010

you are welcome. Rainey

Comment from Pat Groleau
Very nice portrait picture. I love the arrangement of the picture. The pose is different and original. Of course the boys are cute as can be. Very nice.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010

thank you so much

Comment from Raphael Photography
A nice capture of your grand children.
Good natural colour and lighting.
Good depth of field and focus.
Good center of interest and good story telling ability.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010

thank you so much

Comment from jmyron
This would make a great painting, Willie, you might try this one for a starter.


1. Initial impact: 5
2. Creativity of presentation: 5
3. Color harmony: 5
4. Center of interest: 5
5. Technical excellence: 5
6. Technique: 5
7. Story telling ability: 5

John

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010

thank you so much.

Comment from virginian
Very good close-up of your grand children. Lighting, colors and clarity are very nice. Looks like they're having some fun. Nice blue eyes. 'Enjoyed.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010

thank you so much

Comment from sincityyy
Like the title- reminds me of the Monkees song.... here we come, walkin down the street.... LOL. Great skin tones, great details here. their blue eyes are so nice. I bet Mom and Dad want this one framed. Nice job, thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010

thank you so much

Comment from vitek
I love the title Willie - it reminded me of that one saying - THEY'RE BACK!! LOL!
This is a beautiul photograph of two beautiful children. Love how you've got them in the perfect light to enhance their beautful eyes. The background looks like they're playing hide and seek under the picnic table. A PHOTO THAT BRINGS A SMILE! - Joyce Vitek

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010

thank you so much

reply by vitek on 27-Oct-2010

you're welcome! - Joyce

Comment from lippi1
its and interesting photo..and the kids are very good looking...I find it interesting how the girl is just loving the camera..all smiling and the boy is just kind of going with it to please whoever is taking the picture though he looks like he has his mind on other things..very nice.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010

thank you so much

Comment from Robert Price
NIce shot. Good framing. Good color. Focus is dead on. The lighting is excellent. The photo definitely tells a story. Cute subjects!

Very nice!

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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010

thanks

Comment from GrampianPhotographic
Nice capture - look almost like bisembodied heads! Great composition. Well sharp. Exposure just right with good catchlights. Pictorially, might be improved by ncluding all the fingers in frame. Otherwise a super image.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010

thank you so much