Apocalypse
Our solar system, with a huge sun flare.18 total reviews
Comment from darjenka
I like it ! the impact is very eye catching ! love the idea ..at first when I logged in , I thought the yellow planet was a lemon ..a suggestion ? you have the right stuff , ideas , could go long long way with your work ..if you were to use some real images of planets , not these sort of toy images of planets ,would look way more interesting and professional ..get what I mean ? your idea is great , work harder at perfecting it !the lemon sort of bugs me , would like to see something that actually resembles real planets , not lemons ..but I like it !
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011
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I like it ! the impact is very eye catching ! love the idea ..at first when I logged in , I thought the yellow planet was a lemon ..a suggestion ? you have the right stuff , ideas , could go long long way with your work ..if you were to use some real images of planets , not these sort of toy images of planets ,would look way more interesting and professional ..get what I mean ? your idea is great , work harder at perfecting it !the lemon sort of bugs me , would like to see something that actually resembles real planets , not lemons ..but I like it !
Comment Written 17-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011
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I made sure the whole thing was made by me, thanks for the suggestions and review.
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ya ,but did you make the planets ? they don't look like homemade dough!
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Thanks.
Comment from chickadee
Nice techs with some brilliant colors!! The composition has so much imagination with great lighting coming from the sun. The focus is nice with b.g. to enhance the whole scene of planets and sun!!
/Chickadee
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011
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Nice techs with some brilliant colors!! The composition has so much imagination with great lighting coming from the sun. The focus is nice with b.g. to enhance the whole scene of planets and sun!!
/Chickadee
Comment Written 17-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011
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Thank you for your great comments and taking the time to review this one!
Comment from Old Redeye
There's a real feeling of dynamic movement in this piece. I like the varied colors and shapes. Good imagination and execution.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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There's a real feeling of dynamic movement in this piece. I like the varied colors and shapes. Good imagination and execution.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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Thank you, I'm glad you caught that sense of movement! Your comments are very much appreciated!
Comment from lee spencer
now this is nice work
nice effective colours
good balance on planets
nice contrast
good rule of thirds on sun flare
effective background
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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now this is nice work
nice effective colours
good balance on planets
nice contrast
good rule of thirds on sun flare
effective background
Comment Written 17-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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Thank you for your comments, and taking the time to review this one!
Comment from darniforgot
This turned out very nice and has good initial impact. The blue planet in the upper right is hard to see against the dark background (-.5). If you brought the lasers through that portion of the image too (just a few, not a lot since I like how the light fades out toward the edges), it would make that planet stand out as well. The image is well composed and utilizes the space well. Nice job.
5 - Initial rating
-.5 - Planet hard to see
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4.5 - Final rating
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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This turned out very nice and has good initial impact. The blue planet in the upper right is hard to see against the dark background (-.5). If you brought the lasers through that portion of the image too (just a few, not a lot since I like how the light fades out toward the edges), it would make that planet stand out as well. The image is well composed and utilizes the space well. Nice job.
5 - Initial rating
-.5 - Planet hard to see
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4.5 - Final rating
Comment Written 17-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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Thank you for your suggestions, I appreciate your review, I took the opportunity of being one of my first critiques, to brightened the planets and weave some laser beams through....thank you for bringing my attention to it!
Comment from esgjag
I love how this piece explodes. The vibrant colors you select was right on. I just sitting here admiring this piece. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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I love how this piece explodes. The vibrant colors you select was right on. I just sitting here admiring this piece. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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Thank you for your great comments and taking the time to review this one!
Comment from joelise
Eye catching initial impact. Good focus, lighting and vibrant color harmony. The ordered explosive quality is the center of interest. Good composition, cropping and framing. Good technique, technical excellence and story telling potential. Creativity in use of title, presentation and artist's notes.
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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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Eye catching initial impact. Good focus, lighting and vibrant color harmony. The ordered explosive quality is the center of interest. Good composition, cropping and framing. Good technique, technical excellence and story telling potential. Creativity in use of title, presentation and artist's notes.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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Thank you for your great comments, and taking the time to review this one!
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You are very welcome, joelise
Comment from shiloh106
Very vibrant colors in this solar system. Good use of canvas. Composition is pleasing. Lighting works. Some of the planets seem a bit flat to me.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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Very vibrant colors in this solar system. Good use of canvas. Composition is pleasing. Lighting works. Some of the planets seem a bit flat to me.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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Thank you for adressing that problem, I agree and took the opportunity to try and add more dimension ... very much appreciated!