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Teenage Lovers

Teenage ghost meeting at a graveyard

18 total reviews 
Comment from amfunny


Very nice idea with this. Good composition. I think you have done better trees in the pas and I don't know what that is near the boy's butt, but it looks like a man. Love the story. Very creatively done.

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 Comment Written 07-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
    I have to agree with you on the trees. I wanted to try a fall look, up to now I have only done summer, leaves cover up alot of my flaws ..sort of like clothes LOL!
    since the couple are opaque its had to tell since you can't enlarge this to the degree i can, what is by the boys butt is the old womans tombstone, You can see part of it, the rest is blended in behind his butt. After looking at what it looks like from your angel it looks sort of like his butt is on fire LOL
    thanks for the review my friend
    diane
Comment from esgjag


Love the piece and the story really makes it pop even more. The colors and detail are really impressive. Love the way you have the head stone at their feet. Very nice work and a great story. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
    thank you so much esgjag for a fantastic review and rating.Glad you liked my take on that legend
    lynnkah
Comment from taylortia


story gave me waves of goose bumps.
love the idea of it and the story that came with it. i see the mom.
really love how you have set it all out. great work. wendy

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
    wow a six! glad you liked it wendy and the goose bumps was fantastic thats what I was hoping for. You made my mornning thank you so much. Not sure if you have ever heard that legend before, I think every small town has at least one or two I just added my own touches to it.
    thanks again
    lynnkah
    lynnkah
Comment from GaliaG


lovely piece, very sweet and romantic

good colors harmony, excellent technique and skills

thansk for shairng

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
    any one who can scuba dive and want to pet a sleeping shark probably would see the sweet side of this story and not the scary side lOL
    glad you liked it and thank you so much for the rating
    lynnkah
Comment from dolphin0108


Very clever digital work. Almost has a look of a painting. But also has a cool 3D effect with the trees and "smear" effect. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
    thank you so much dolphin for a wonderful review and rating
    lynnkah
Comment from cleo85


Guess that is one of the most popular urban legend. True or not, it goes around. Interesting take on the Halloween theme. I see Ole Mom; but I would Like her better on the right between the two trees in her full ghostly body. Just an idea]
I like the ghostly appearance of the lovers and the smoke fuzzily over the grave yard with it's cheerful summer colors. Nice contradiction.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
    LOL I think everyone has heard that legend one way or anther. It was told to me as a young kid by my older brother about a graveyard near our house. He took me and a few of my friends to that graveyard on halloween , thats where the halloween came in LOL, by the time he was finished with his rendition of the legend He had me and all three of my friends screaming our heads off, and him laughing so hard he had tears in his eyes.. he is almost 8 years older than me so you can guess how much fun he had I think I was about 10 or 11 at the time. LOL.
    I added the Ole Mom after a reviewer gave me the idea of other ghost watching the two lovers, I thought it would be funny to make it just the mom but since the painting was already finished and I had the tombstone in the back ground thats where I decided to put her, wanted just enough of her sticking out of the grave to be taunting.. LOL I could have added her between the two tress just didn't think about it, your so observant sometimes its scary LOL but i'm glad you look that closely at my paintings it is such a big help and is always deeply appreciated I hope you know that
    lynn
reply by cleo85 on 06-Oct-2011
    Yes, I know that.
    Locking at your pictures is always a pleasure :-)
    You really need to learn how to use layers and save in the format were layers are separated.In this case you could move Ole Mom and the gravestone around were ever you want them to go. I wished I could show you. It is so hard to explain here; especially since I don't have twisted brush.
    You have Photo explosion, don't you? The file format there what saves the layers separately is called Pex or pex. When you save ypour picture hit -save as- There should several show up. click on Pex background is a layer, than you had put in the lovers right? makes two layers. The to layers should show up separately now. When you work on it you are able to move the lovers around. Save now in Pex format. Close picture. Now reopen picture. It should reopen in pex with the layers still intact [able to move the lovers]. Write me if that works.
    Cleo
Comment from robina1978


What a most scary and horrible story. Your art suits it ever so well.
Hope your art does not scare someone to death on Halloween. Is coming soon or not?

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2011
    I think this is about the scariest thing I'll do for halloween althugh I never know what i'm going to do until I set at the computer LOL
    Needless to say the story is a made up story that I have heard since I was a kid, I think every town has to have their own little scary stories or legends to tell kids to try to keep them out of trouble. thanks for the reiview robina
    diane
reply by robina1978 on 07-Oct-2011
    Welcome Diane. Nice these stories living on.
Comment from Anne


Funny write up the ay you ended it. I like the way you have done your Halloween picture. The way you have the two ghosts in this is great. I like the way you have done the background with the trees. You just needed to add a vulture of a few ghosts up in the trees watching them. A very creative picture.

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 Comment Written 05-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2011
    cool idea never thought about the other ghost watching them, making one of the ghost the killers mom and shaking her finger at them would have made for a funny twist LOL
    I might just add that thad then repost thanks for the idea Anne and the rating
    lynnkah