Comment from Derek Redfern
Good use of selective focus to pick out certain areas and I also like the vignette frame as it highlights the flower very well. I would revisit the framing though as there's a little too much on the left compared to the right. Same at the top.

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 Comment Written 03-May-2012

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reply by the author on 03-May-2012

Thanks Derek, took your advice and cropped a little from right. Cheers Mary