Rodeo American Tradition SD B
Mixed media pen&ink, composed in photoshop21 total reviews
Comment from stanjo
This looks great Lucien it is very creative I like the action shot of this it is clear and well detailed to perfection thanks for sharing!!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2006
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This looks great Lucien it is very creative I like the action shot of this it is clear and well detailed to perfection thanks for sharing!!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2006
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2006
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Stanjo, you are welcome, thanks for the review and looking, glad you like it take care and cheers...
LvO
Comment from NIREartworks
nicely done i prefer this one to the other one, this has a nice feel to it and looks exciting and just grabs me more, well done eh
Petros
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2006
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nicely done i prefer this one to the other one, this has a nice feel to it and looks exciting and just grabs me more, well done eh
Petros
Comment Written 12-Feb-2006
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2006
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Arks, thanks you for the look and the review, much appreciated... glad it grabbed you, hope it wasn't painful...cheers... LvO
Comment from channeled
Another great work of art that you've rendered with great skill and expertism. Really love the composition and strong lines of presentation in this. Absolutely magnificent work!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2006
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Another great work of art that you've rendered with great skill and expertism. Really love the composition and strong lines of presentation in this. Absolutely magnificent work!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2006
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2006
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Channeled, Thank you for the time and the review, much appreciated, glad you like it...
take care... cheers... LvO
Comment from JohnnyCanuck
Overall I feel this is very run of the mill in the design. I feel that the pointalism in the artwork doesn't work great with the outer element. I feel a more simplified high contrast picture would have worked better. I'm also not liking the font on the bottom part of the circle I don't think it compliments the Rodeo font.
On the plus side I like the pointalism on it's own. You did a really nice job on it. Although some areas where the cowboy meets the horse could use a bit more definition.
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Overall I feel this is very run of the mill in the design. I feel that the pointalism in the artwork doesn't work great with the outer element. I feel a more simplified high contrast picture would have worked better. I'm also not liking the font on the bottom part of the circle I don't think it compliments the Rodeo font.
On the plus side I like the pointalism on it's own. You did a really nice job on it. Although some areas where the cowboy meets the horse could use a bit more definition.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2006
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2006
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Johnny, Johnny, I'll definately analysis the design and keep your comments and those of several others in mind... thanks. seeings how you like the pointalism part, I hope you take the time to review the other pieces (stricktly pointalism) and give me your thoughts on those as well... Cheers... LvO
Comment from kaycees world
The cowboys hat is so big it completely covers his face and what you can see of his face is blurred. Also there is no grimace on his face that a cowboy always has while riding a wild horse, there face isn't just plain, you can work on that area as it needs improvement. Kaycees world
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2006
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The cowboys hat is so big it completely covers his face and what you can see of his face is blurred. Also there is no grimace on his face that a cowboy always has while riding a wild horse, there face isn't just plain, you can work on that area as it needs improvement. Kaycees world
Comment Written 12-Feb-2006
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2006
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Kaycees world, 1st. thanks for looking and taking the time to write such an in depth review.
2nd. I will definately look and work on/at how I can improve my application of the little dots to try and get emotion into the face.
3rd. The hat pulled down onto his head is just the way this guy wore it...
take care & Cheers... LvO
Comment from yekis
you have excellent rodeo theme there....rodeos, btw, were much more famous in the past....black and white and blurry pictures complements your theme (since that was how posters and ads were designed before)
a negative comment however on the typeface you used on the phrase "an excellent tradition"....you see...those fonts were not even existed in cowboy days....hence, makes your artwork a flop...use serifs fonts, perhaps the real fonts that were used when stamping wine barrels with labels
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2006
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you have excellent rodeo theme there....rodeos, btw, were much more famous in the past....black and white and blurry pictures complements your theme (since that was how posters and ads were designed before)
a negative comment however on the typeface you used on the phrase "an excellent tradition"....you see...those fonts were not even existed in cowboy days....hence, makes your artwork a flop...use serifs fonts, perhaps the real fonts that were used when stamping wine barrels with labels
Comment Written 12-Feb-2006
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2006
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Yekis, thanks for the in depth constructive review and taking the time to look, I hope you mean "An American Tradition"? if not then we have a real problem here Stanly (I mean Yekis)... so I guess if it had more of a stamped feel, it would be better? take care and cheers.... LvO
Comment from tomandsusan
You could certainly work on better resolution. Art is a form of perfection. Outside of that, I think that you have potential.
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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2006
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You could certainly work on better resolution. Art is a form of perfection. Outside of that, I think that you have potential.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2006
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2006
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Tom&Susan, Thanks for taking the time to view and review much appreciated, take care, maybe the next time I'll hit that mark... will keep trying as long as you keep reviewing...cheers...LvO
Comment from JIMX
Excellent design and composition that shows motion and power for us to enjoy!This is a fabulous picture!! What a beautiful way of creating art!! You've captured everything perfectly!! GREAT work!! Thanks for sharing!!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2006
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Excellent design and composition that shows motion and power for us to enjoy!This is a fabulous picture!! What a beautiful way of creating art!! You've captured everything perfectly!! GREAT work!! Thanks for sharing!!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2006
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2006
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JIMX, thanks for the wonderful review, much appreciated, have great weekend... take care & Cheers... LvO
Comment from tuckerkao
Excellent coin design with graphic styles from the early 1920s. The textures look very detailed with smoothened edges and interesting cosmic fonts.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2006
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Excellent coin design with graphic styles from the early 1920s. The textures look very detailed with smoothened edges and interesting cosmic fonts.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2006
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2006
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tuckerkao, thanks for looking and the review, much appreciated and take care, and cheers... LvO
Comment from Lynjupiter
I like this one better then the last one. I like the way the horse and cowboy fill up the space in the middle. This is very nicely done and everything is spaced evenly :)
Lynda
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2006
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I like this one better then the last one. I like the way the horse and cowboy fill up the space in the middle. This is very nicely done and everything is spaced evenly :)
Lynda
Comment Written 11-Feb-2006
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2006
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lynda, thanks you for taking the time to look and for the great review, much appreciated...take care and cheers... LvO