Comment from dalebraatz
A wonderful first impression and a great story telling work of art, like the details and depth you have created with great colors, like all the action going on, a pleasure to look at, thank you for sharing, dale

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 Comment Written 17-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018

Thank you for such a lovely review