Comment from
Neilnap773
a colourful little piece with crayons which Im well aware that they are not the best to sketch with,however you've captured these two animals nicely and included some nice colour in the background with the christmassy feel.I would like to have seen some heavier and darker tones throughout to achieve some depth in your presentation
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
Thank you for your review and in-depth critique which is welcome. In hindsight I should have had a closer inspection for improvement and darkertones in some areas are a good suggestion. Thanks again.