Comment from jesuel
that's really cool I really like the way you did it it was put together very well the design is both creative and unique and the dialog was great fine work here

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023

Thanks #1! I figured you would get a kick out of this skit. (Thumbs up) both Fanstory and myself thank you for the great review

Comment from Linda Bickston
MK this is a great ad for Fanstory. Halloween is certainly a fun time for artists and creative people. You are the best at creativity. Your imagination shines in this ad. I love it

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023

Thanks Linda! Both Fanstory and myself thank you for the awesome review

Comment from Christine389
Hahaha - this made me smile! There's a lot of great detail - down to those bubbling cocktails, which are a brilliant idea. I hope the skeleton guy gets his date! I wouldn't know where to begin putting something like this together - bravo!!

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 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023

Glad this made you chuckle more coming so stay tuned! Both Fanstory and myself thank you for the great review

Comment from seshadri_sreenivasan
This short but well-made video conjures a spine-tingling atmosphere, for the Halloween contest. With expertly crafted subject matter it promises to leave viewers to embrace the chills of the season. Well done, bro as always! Cheers!

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023

Thanks bro!.both Fanstory and myself thank you for the awesome review

Comment from helvi2
Hi Mark, I've always said you do a marvelous job of conveying a story in your artistry! Love the romantic connection between boney the girl. The bubbling drinks are really a nice touch!
In the video, loved how they seemed to know someone was watching their private moment! LOL This is cute and a great way to draw in writers for contest. Very Nicely Done! :o) Nancy
PS. I know you were planning to do a Fan Team Halloween image last year but time caught up with you. Are you planning to post it this year? :

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 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023

wellllll..it dont look like it only because doing 4 halloween videos and 4 christmas videos..(one for each contest..art/photo/poetry/writing) i just knocked out 2 so far and trying to get the other 2 done on the Halloween one before i start on christmas..yep Tom has me hopping and im loving every minute of it..wink wink..both FanStory and myself thank you for this great review. (thumbs up)

reply by helvi2 on 07-Sep-2023

Man, You are busy bee Mark!!!!! The most important thing is that you're having fun! I know I enjoy whatever you do! :o)