Comment from seshadri_sreenivasan
With fine draftsmanship and handling of the medium, you have created a painting which is classical in its composition. The harmony of colors and atmospheric light play a supporting role. This piece records a fleeting moment of with a feeling of grace. Good luck in the contest

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 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Thank you so much, artist friend, for reviewing and encouraging. Artists of fine works like yourself know how to appreciate others' works. I appreciate your work and support.

Comment from April Kay
Very nice. Maybe a bit more muscle tone shapes or lines?
I'm being constructive when I say these, possibly make the focal point a little bigger maybe a bit more detail. It looks almost abstract if thats your way then I give you 110%

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 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

It is for this particular work. Surprised at the 3. I have not received such a low rating. Hope you will reconsider.