Comment from Mark Lovegrove
Very good acrylic paint and ink on paper image here Ray. Love the colours of the background. Subject stands out very well in bright coloured clothes. The floor tiles reflecting the background colours is a nice touch. Well done and thanks for sharing :-)

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 Comment Written 16-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024

Mark, thank you for your great assessment and review. It is nice to know you enjoy it. Ray

Comment from Montana Shooter
Ray, I really like this. The young girl really stands out against the background of greens, blues, and oranges. She reminds me of so many of the young girls I see walking about on school grounds. I am always in awe as to the hair pieces and ribbons those girls use to decorate their hair.

Very nice.

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 Comment Written 16-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024

Ruth Ann, thank you for your wonderful review and observations. I tried to present this girl as the female youth of today, wanting to be with it, a tad shy and wanting to be accepted. I am so glad you enjoy it. Ray