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Impending Doom

poor mousy

34 total reviews 
Comment from lorac1


That is a verry striking digital presentation. I like the way yiou have colored the green snake, and the way you have made the leaves shine. The composition is very nice; the snake provides great lines and shapes.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2010

Comment from Linesks27


This is almost cute in a way, the little mouse lives another day. I just wish that you could have done something to make the mouse stand out just a tad more, the snake is so bright in contrast but the mouse just kinda blends in.

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2010


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2010
    He's kinda blending in cause he's hiding :) At least he hopes he is. Thank you for taking the time to review, Linesks.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2010
    Thank you for taking the time to review this for me, Linesks. I appreciate it.
Comment from ducilla


LOL..Are you telling us that that poor snake is going to go home hungry and starving again?.. LOL.. its the mouse or the snake out there in nature..Really nicely done with the snake and the scales Shawn.. The "glowing" nature of your design is excellent to view.. Good colors and a real story to go along with the art.. Thanks,Dennis

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2010


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2010
    I was wondering if I could get someone to laugh this morning :) And you made me laugh by doing so. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the fun, Dennis!! I love it!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2010
    Thank you so very much for the excellent review, Dennis!! :)
Comment from Creator's Touch


ewww.lol sorry...scaryyy. I'm not fond of snakes but you did an amazing job with this. Spectacular color harmony and lighting. Great little story, hope the mouse can get away.lol initially reminded me of the garden of Eden:) Nicely done with the tech work and color choices are fabulous. Nice and lush looking jungle or garden. Great work. Thanks for sharing!!

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2010

Comment from xennia


This is so cool, I love the way you have presented this garden blurred and the snake so sharp and so much look alive. Wonderful use of colors and lighting, amazing composition with plenty of wonderful details. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2010

Comment from Dazzleme


This is so lovely! What a wonderful composition. I am far from being a snake lover but this is just one of those compositions whereas that does not matter to me as I am so taken up by your wonderful creation of this overall image. You have done an excellent job creating this artwork!

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2010


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2010
    Thank you so very, very much, D!! :)
Comment from AlienVoyager


Striking colors, quite dark, they created rather dark atmosphere. And the snake there sealed it. The skin texture of it is cool. The lighting is a bit confusing a bit. Btw the mouse doesn't seem to be 3D enough compared to the snake, was it on purpose? I was thinking maybe it needs darker shadow under it? It's just an opinion.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2010


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2010
    Perfect! Thank you, ET :) Much better. I also put a highlight over part of the mouse. Thank you so much for the help and the great review!! :)
Comment from surrealvalley


Great colors and I like the surrounding environment you've created. The snake is very interesting. I like the way you've expressed the mouse in a shadow form. Wonderful detail throughout the work keeps my attention!

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2010

Comment from Angelheart The First


Initial Impact-5
Composition-5
Creativity of Presentation-5.5
Color-5.5
Center of Interest-5
Technique-5
Storytelling Ability-5
Lighting-5
I love this one Shawn and it was a cleaver idea making the mouse kind of hard to see.That's one way to get people to look!!
The colors are great,nice and bold and really stand out.The lighting is also very well placed within the work.
Very enjoyable hon.Thanks for sharing this.
Angelheart :)

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2010

Comment from DonFofo


Great colors, very vivid and exotic, thank you for sharing, Don Fofo
? Initial impact 5
? Creativity of presentation 5
? Color Harmony 5
? Center of Interest 5
? Technical Excellence 5
? Technique 5
? Story Telling Ability ?
? Lighting 5

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2010