Comment from jennifermuller
initial impact 5
color harmony 5
interest 5
creative presentation 5
focus 4.
the focus looks off , especiall farther out on the water and on some of the houses and trees. such a great place to live. photoid61

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2010

Thank you very much. You are right, the focus is set on the rain cloud. But sorry I don't agree that this is wrong. The soft apperance of the land and buildings is in purpose to avoid a pixellation on the outline of the houses and the beach as often happen in the difficult and harsh conditions of light in our area. [The beach is still in sunlight wile a storm comes in from south-west] It would also be complicated to show the rain bands over the water. The houses are NOT my main object. The area is.