Comment from GaliaG
nice idea, but I liked the original more

this looks very busy and distracting even for me who loves abstracts

thansk for sharing

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 Comment Written 15-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011

Thank you very much

Comment from willie
Nice work!
This is really neat! It is very unusual and it did make an interesting abstract! The natural ones are better! I think I might try this!

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 Comment Written 15-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011

Thank you very much