Comment from Dick Lee Shia
Sixteen Canadian Naval fleet enlists to attend a debut party wherein each of them will give the celebrator one candle.
This is a one in a million arrangement that's why I give you a bonus half star. Anyway a six will not be counted to your credit...
Next time please command the two who are out out the line to follow the one ahead so as not to break the line.
Nice diagonal slicing of the frame.
Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 25-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2013

many thanks Dick for your funny comments and high rating