Comment from Lucien van Oosten
Really do like the composition and the way you have used the media in this drawing. The boy and his mischief being at the central point of the composition overrides the fact the board leads the eye away from him, there is a little drama there that almost overrides the viewers anticipation of the action that is about to occur. Well though out and well composed. Might have given consideration of breaking yup the white wave crests a little. For me overall it is a good drawing.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013

noted on the waves and thaniks so much penmaster for the great review.

reply by Lucien van Oosten on 23-Apr-2013

MK,
anytime and always,... Cheers!!!
have great week.
Lucien

Comment from david F
yeah nothing changes , , very funny and clever but what i like about this from an art point of view are all the paralel lines , so well balanced , love the sea too , great stuff

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013

than ks bro for the great review,.

Comment from Mara del Mar
Ha, ha! OMG. When I report a work yours, it open smiling beforehand, but after the laughter escapes. LOL. The dreamy eyes of the girl soon will embers of fire. Good luck!
Mara

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013

thanks mara for the great review.

Comment from PipesLine
Well presented, you support your sister very well, even of your intentions might be a bid evil. Like the color combinations, gives it a real beach fell, Once again well done. John

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013

thanks john for the great review.

Comment from Vid Vidya
Excellent art with a good touch of humour and truth. Boys are always boys.Concept is new and nice. Very well drawn art.
All the best

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013

all down with sharpie/bic markers on poster..wink. than ks for the great review.

Comment from Tony B
Great representation of the young lad getting in to mischief, as little boys we were all fascinated by the female persuasion, always trying to push the limits just to get there attention. Well done work!

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013

thanks bro for the great review.

Comment from adrianart
This made me laugh!

In the first place its a great piece of art, love those layers of colour from the blues to the warm sand. Even the skin looks like they are been out in that sun getting a tan.

You can just imagine this happening on the beach that girl looking at you with that kid with his silly grin, with that crab ( the mind boggles on what might happen next) or he could be looking at the girls behind!

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013

thanks for the great review.

Comment from Christine389
Oh this is superb Mark. It really made me smile - typical boy but give him a few years and he'll be studying the form! Great composition and detail. A fab entry for the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013

thanks chrissie for the great reviwew.

Comment from colbrelli1
Another one of your clever pieces. I can't award you any higher as I don't have any left atm. This is extraordinary in that the ocean hs been depicted in a simple way yet you are so good with your detail in the people. It is such a natural looking drawing. Very well done - love it.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013

thanks so muich for the great review.

Comment from GaliaG
oh, yes, I want to lay on the sand in the beach, but it is raining like crazy here and there is even snow in the north, first time after 10years in this time of the year

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 Comment Written 20-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013

thanks for the great review.