One-On-One
Digital silhouettes of two basketball players.6 total reviews
Comment from paintingsheep
You have a very excellent way of capturing the essence of the activity in a few strong details...this one is an excellent example. The position of the sneakers and the curve of the shoulder gives this real tension and shows the spirit of the game. Well done! Gena
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2010
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You have a very excellent way of capturing the essence of the activity in a few strong details...this one is an excellent example. The position of the sneakers and the curve of the shoulder gives this real tension and shows the spirit of the game. Well done! Gena
Comment Written 16-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2010
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I am very grateful to you for your detailed critique of my artwork. Thank you also for your 5-Star rating.
VMarguarite
Comment from grassroots08
We have a big Game coming up here in Syracuse and the team is doing quite well for itself. GO ORANGE is the tag line. They are usually all dressed in orange when they play. Nice tribute to the game of basketball. Cheers, Don
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2010
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We have a big Game coming up here in Syracuse and the team is doing quite well for itself. GO ORANGE is the tag line. They are usually all dressed in orange when they play. Nice tribute to the game of basketball. Cheers, Don
Comment Written 12-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2010
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Thanks Don for your high rating of my basketball artwork. I am glad that you like it.
Take Care,
VMarguarite
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You could have at least done the ball in orange . Ha Ha "Go Orange"
Cheers, Don
Comment from Smurphgirl
This is excellent. Beautifully balanced, terrific color choice, and great subject. I continue to love your work and always look forward to reviewing it.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2010
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This is excellent. Beautifully balanced, terrific color choice, and great subject. I continue to love your work and always look forward to reviewing it.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2010
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Thank you so much for your very kind and supportive comments.
VMarguarite
Comment from stanjo
This is cool looking it's as if i'm looking down on them from above with the sun out, good color harmony, good impact and presentation thanks for sharing!!
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2010
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This is cool looking it's as if i'm looking down on them from above with the sun out, good color harmony, good impact and presentation thanks for sharing!!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2010
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I am very pleased that your kind and accurate comments reflect exactly what I want the viewers of this artwork to see. I also thank you for your 5-Star rating.
VMarguarite
Comment from vipshehan-Nikon
This is a nice digital art of one of my preferred sports. I also like the shadows which you have created which has added a good interest for the viewer.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2010
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This is a nice digital art of one of my preferred sports. I also like the shadows which you have created which has added a good interest for the viewer.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2010
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Thank you for your welcomed informative critique.
VMarguarite
Comment from Lucien van Oosten
The idea is good and the angle is good as well, the edges on the figures and the shadows they are casting look ragged and rough. I also think that there are parts of the shadow that looks off. Especially under the ball, I'm thinking the light is coming from the upper left, if that is a true assessment on my part the shadow there is to much under the ball, the length of the shadows seem to demand that change as I see it. Also might consider adding a few court lines in the field of gray to give the image some perspective. ( see the lines to get the idea.)
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2010
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The idea is good and the angle is good as well, the edges on the figures and the shadows they are casting look ragged and rough. I also think that there are parts of the shadow that looks off. Especially under the ball, I'm thinking the light is coming from the upper left, if that is a true assessment on my part the shadow there is to much under the ball, the length of the shadows seem to demand that change as I see it. Also might consider adding a few court lines in the field of gray to give the image some perspective. ( see the lines to get the idea.)
Comment Written 11-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to share with me your suggestions on improvement. I am much appreciative.
VMarguarite