Orbit
Purple laser circling around a green laser tube.1 total reviews
Comment from Lethal005
this is an invasion, an attack, a fierce probing
either that or superman lost his frisbee
this doesnt say space to me, this says a parasite attacking a cell inside a body, but im all about battles and whats stronger and what has the best defence haha
so im saying the little green will win this his glow is green and poisonous and the blue frisbee parasite doesnt know whats coming his way!!
lookout arrgghhh
im reviewing this because i checked out your collection and liked this one the most
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
this is an invasion, an attack, a fierce probing
either that or superman lost his frisbee
this doesnt say space to me, this says a parasite attacking a cell inside a body, but im all about battles and whats stronger and what has the best defence haha
so im saying the little green will win this his glow is green and poisonous and the blue frisbee parasite doesnt know whats coming his way!!
lookout arrgghhh
im reviewing this because i checked out your collection and liked this one the most
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Cool storytelling, where do you get it? You write music or what? You should, if you don't already do so...seems to come so easy for you... a struggle for me, considering English is my second language, nevertheless, some people just have this god given talent...shouldn't let it go to waste! That was a compliment, by the way!
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well, with english being your second language you write very well, and to understand what i write is a huge accomplishment, my mind is on another planet sometimes, and its...hmm, how do i out it, almost annoying i guess to read that you think i have a talent and its going to waste, i say that because all my family say that, the few friends i have say that, but i cant see what talent they talk about? and here you are, yet another one, telling me im wasting this so called talent for writing?? how am i wasting it? im just thinking out loud and typing away, everyone does that, why pick on me! hahahaha, i really want to swear my head off here but im not sure if youd appreciate that...im not upset here, im just frustrated that i cant see what other people can?? it does my head in
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I don't know why you say you think you can't see what other people can.....when you see MORE than other people do....you bypass the obvious, ignore the bullshit, and end up way over their average heads anyway...This is my observation, from the short time I have known you!
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this discussion/argument could go on forever,i'll end it here by saying i know what im good at and know my faults too, im sure i could see some good values in you that you yourself cant see either, thats all im saying, as ive heard time and time again "you often cannot see what lies obviously right before your very own eyes" and that pertains to many aspects in life
Comment from pfwelder
It looks like something coming from out of space. Lovely colors. Good depth. I like the dark background. I would like to see it without the blue and white ring as a stand alone piece. nice work
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
It looks like something coming from out of space. Lovely colors. Good depth. I like the dark background. I would like to see it without the blue and white ring as a stand alone piece. nice work
Comment Written 20-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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Thanks for your review!
Comment from Nanticoke
Brilliant. It does look like outer space orbital flight or beam me up, Scotty. Creative editing, artful!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
Brilliant. It does look like outer space orbital flight or beam me up, Scotty. Creative editing, artful!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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Thank you, most of it was just laser, but I did extend the green tube, and added a yellow center!
Comment from dolphin0108
Very cool colors and
effect. I can almost
see it glowing in
different directions
right off the screen
at me. Love your laser
stuff. Cool!!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
Very cool colors and
effect. I can almost
see it glowing in
different directions
right off the screen
at me. Love your laser
stuff. Cool!!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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Thanks for review more of my laser, really appreciated at this point!
Comment from ElaineHunter
looks like a lot of fun to take this. love the finished Photograph and the green and blues with the white hollow of the blue lazor.
well done and thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
looks like a lot of fun to take this. love the finished Photograph and the green and blues with the white hollow of the blue lazor.
well done and thanks for sharing
Comment Written 20-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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Thanks for taking the time for this review, greatly appreciated at this point!
Comment from Angelheart The First
Yes,Yes..laser perfection and very deserving a six star rating.This is really a very wicked looking one and that green spear looks like it's travelling warp speed throught that beautiful laser circle you did.
Brava,I love it!!
Angelheart :)
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2011
Yes,Yes..laser perfection and very deserving a six star rating.This is really a very wicked looking one and that green spear looks like it's travelling warp speed throught that beautiful laser circle you did.
Brava,I love it!!
Angelheart :)
Comment Written 18-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2011
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Thanks so much! This picture is making me do some research on laser itself, the green laser makes me wonder if a laser beam is actually a tube? or is that a reflection? Any way, thanks again for your awesome review.
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It's always a pleasure for me :)
Comment from Old Redeye
This is so bright, it almost hurts your eyes! I reminds me of a solar image. I like the diagonal element. It looks like it's injecting something into the nucleus.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2011
This is so bright, it almost hurts your eyes! I reminds me of a solar image. I like the diagonal element. It looks like it's injecting something into the nucleus.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2011
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Thank you for your review! A lot of my laser shots look spacey!
The green tube, (I am trying to figure out) is a green laser,(which would mean that laser is a tube) or its a reflection!
Comment from donkeyoatey
Perhaps God was looking in his closet? This reminds me a vbit of an outer (or inner) space search. Donkeyoatey
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2011
Perhaps God was looking in his closet? This reminds me a vbit of an outer (or inner) space search. Donkeyoatey
Comment Written 17-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2011
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That was very good! Very spacey....I like that. Thank you for taking the time to review this one!
Comment from tedmunro
this is another very bright and colorful laser show. it has the look of a neon light. nice job, a pleasure to review and ty for sharing
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2011
this is another very bright and colorful laser show. it has the look of a neon light. nice job, a pleasure to review and ty for sharing
Comment Written 17-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2011
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Thanks Ted, I thought maybe a little too simple but when I checked it out closer, and saw the green laser was a tube, and the impact it made when it collided with the weak red one, was fascination all over again. Back to the books, are lasers a solid line of are they tubular? hmmmmmm.....
Comment from DJack
Interesting idea. Good choice for a background, it makes everything to look like everything it happens in Universe. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2011
Interesting idea. Good choice for a background, it makes everything to look like everything it happens in Universe. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2011
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Thank you for your review, very appreciateadd while I am developing this particular series! And your right, everything does happen in Universe!