
Beautiful water lilies
Water Lilly reflections2 total reviews
Comment from nikman
A very good looking image posted here into the competition. Your fine and full composition offers us an enjoyable view of that lovely bloom. Exposure and sharpness are good. Well done and good luck!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023
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A very good looking image posted here into the competition. Your fine and full composition offers us an enjoyable view of that lovely bloom. Exposure and sharpness are good. Well done and good luck!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023
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Thanks much.
Comment from avmurray
The water lily looks really lovely, and also the reflections from it is well done. The dark green background is working well, but I think you could have made the flower brighter. Now the whole picture looks a bit gloomy.
I also think the composition could have been better. I cannot say the balance is totally off, but the lilies and pads are too much spread around with nothing to hold the composition together.
I think this would have looked much better if you had left out The lilies in the background and placed the pads closer to the main flower.
Still I think this is an over all well done digital creation, but in need of some adjustments. I wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023
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The water lily looks really lovely, and also the reflections from it is well done. The dark green background is working well, but I think you could have made the flower brighter. Now the whole picture looks a bit gloomy.
I also think the composition could have been better. I cannot say the balance is totally off, but the lilies and pads are too much spread around with nothing to hold the composition together.
I think this would have looked much better if you had left out The lilies in the background and placed the pads closer to the main flower.
Still I think this is an over all well done digital creation, but in need of some adjustments. I wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023
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Hi Annie, thanks again for your constructive comments. I see what you meant by a bit gloomy. Flowers should be vibrant and attention gathering. I did increase the brightness in photoshop to make the painting less gloomy. So thanks once again!
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You are more than welcome.