Flowers & Still Life
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Comment from Dunworkin
Very nice work. I especially like the crackle background and the touch of red on the apple. You are no novice I can tell.
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Very nice work. I especially like the crackle background and the touch of red on the apple. You are no novice I can tell.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
Comment from Alexander Grant
Nice nice nice! love love the colors, interesting design also. good background and blue little flowers are cool great job
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Nice nice nice! love love the colors, interesting design also. good background and blue little flowers are cool great job
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
Comment from jjdiii
Beautiful work. But maybe just a little too much yellow. A little tinge of red for the applies and stripes (vase) might has added a little more warmth. Other than that, great framing, great composition. Good job!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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Beautiful work. But maybe just a little too much yellow. A little tinge of red for the applies and stripes (vase) might has added a little more warmth. Other than that, great framing, great composition. Good job!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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Thank you so very much, jj, and thank you for the tips. It's a bit too late to change anything now though as the contest deadline was Thursday. I'm fixing it up some to post on my other site though. Again, thank you! :)shawn
Comment from shiloh106
Lovely still life.
I really like the way the yellows seem to almost glow.
Good composition. The yellow and purples look great together. Nice detail in the curtains.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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Lovely still life.
I really like the way the yellows seem to almost glow.
Good composition. The yellow and purples look great together. Nice detail in the curtains.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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Hey, Shiloh. I thought you were gone. I looked through the members list when I first came back and couldn't find you. I forgot that if you don't post anything for a while, one's name drops off the list. Good to see you, and thank you ever so much for the wonderful comments. Very very much appreciated. :)shawn
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It has been awhile since I've been around. I started a little art business and have been putting lots of time into it :) Good to hear from you and thanks for looking for me!
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Russ Cleversley (PixelArtisan)did the same thing. Sold his printing business and started an art supply shop. In the Brooklyn area, I believe. Good for you! How do you like it? I wish you the best of luck with it. :)shawn
Comment from adr1an
cracking artwork shawn-super colours contrasts depth & composition giving a pleasing feel to the presentation once again showing off your great digital technique & artistic talent-good work indeed!
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cracking artwork shawn-super colours contrasts depth & composition giving a pleasing feel to the presentation once again showing off your great digital technique & artistic talent-good work indeed!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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Thank you ever so much, Adrian. Could I ask why the 4.5 because you don't mention anything wrong. I do sincerly thank you for the beautiful review though. :)shawn
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!!!!!!!*****sorry gal-flamin slipped somewhere-i,ll go & adjust that right now!!!
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LOL. I've done that before! You didn't have to put it so high, but who's complaining! LOL. Thanks a million, Adrian!! :)
Comment from Snopaw
Stunningly beautiful Shawn. The yellow and purples completely compliment each other. The use of the antique gold curtains really sets it off and makes your objects stand out in sharp relief. Beautiful work :))
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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Stunningly beautiful Shawn. The yellow and purples completely compliment each other. The use of the antique gold curtains really sets it off and makes your objects stand out in sharp relief. Beautiful work :))
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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Thank you ever so much for the beautiful review and fabulous rating, Sis. Ha, I finally got to say it cause this isn't a blind contest. lol. Again, thank you! Very very much appreciated. :)shawn
Comment from pegsart
This is very nicely done. The colours contrast well. The digital work is good. The flowers look so dainty.
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This is very nicely done. The colours contrast well. The digital work is good. The flowers look so dainty.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
Comment from 1939noel
Very nice composition and this coupled with the background results in quite a nice image. The subtle colours also make this a very nice painting.
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Very nice composition and this coupled with the background results in quite a nice image. The subtle colours also make this a very nice painting.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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Thank you so very very much, Noel. :)shawn
Comment from Lucien van Oosten
This still life composition has nice color harmony between all the various components within the frame. I think the posed, layout is a little sterile, segmented, the apples need to be incorporated better into the composition. Suggestion, like maybe one more in front of the vase. Also thinking the stamen need to be less fuzzy and have more definition. The other thing I would consider is creating a more dramatic light source, so you create a shadow that adds flow and better depth to the image. I do like the color scheme just needs a little better flow.
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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This still life composition has nice color harmony between all the various components within the frame. I think the posed, layout is a little sterile, segmented, the apples need to be incorporated better into the composition. Suggestion, like maybe one more in front of the vase. Also thinking the stamen need to be less fuzzy and have more definition. The other thing I would consider is creating a more dramatic light source, so you create a shadow that adds flow and better depth to the image. I do like the color scheme just needs a little better flow.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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I thank you for your time, Lucien, but I'm afraid I can't do anything about it now, as the contest deadline was Thursday. If it wasn't already entered, I'd disable it off the front page. Again, thank you.
:)shawn
Comment from Shakeadog
I like the end result here
Very good composition and colours too
Lighting is perfect
I also like the backdrop
Well created
Good luck
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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I like the end result here
Very good composition and colours too
Lighting is perfect
I also like the backdrop
Well created
Good luck
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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Thank you ever so much, Troy. :)shawn