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Comment from goodsnap


I wish it was more realistically done. The picture is otherwise ok but the detailing could have been better with a little shading and life to it.

 Comment Written 07-May-2006


reply by the author on 07-May-2006
    ggosnap, more realistically... like my bears, my tiger, horses, my dogs? (take alook at my portfolio, and let me know.) like more dots? thanks for the time and the review... Take are... Cheers... LvO
Comment from veron.n


this is very nicely done, i like the technique you have used here, well done, thank you for sharing this one with us,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 Comment Written 07-May-2006


reply by the author on 07-May-2006
    veron.n, you are welcome and thanks for your time and the review... much appreciated... Cheers... LvO
Comment from georgiaangel24


It had to have taken hours to draw this, it is excellent. When I first saw it it made me think of a frog in a childrens book. But after reading your comments now I see the ostrich and not the frog. Excellent job.

 Comment Written 07-May-2006


reply by the author on 07-May-2006
    georgiaangel24, thank you for looking and then reviewing this piece, much appreciated by me... take care and cheers... LvO
Comment from Gryphons Aerie


great picture

crisp and clean technique

colours are sharp and vivid

cropping great and composition is good

everything is very well exectuted

 Comment Written 07-May-2006


reply by the author on 07-May-2006
    Gryphons Aerie, thank you for the review, and your time in writing it... take care...cheers... LvO
Comment from daffodil


Lucien, I think you did a great job with this, and certainly achieved the look you intended! I wanted to actually physically back up away from the picture when I first saw it, as he looked rather threatening and intense, LOL! Excellent job of concentrating on the eye, and getting the character of this bird captured so well! This one definitely gets the attention!

 Comment Written 07-May-2006


reply by the author on 07-May-2006
    daffodil, they can be rather intense in the way they look at times... thanks for the review... take care... Cheers... LvO
Comment from channeled


You have rendered this magnificently with great skill and style. Really love the tonal quality and colors displayed in this. The composition is so very well formed and you have done a wonderful job of presenting this with spectacular aspects. Love it! Fantastically done!

 Comment Written 07-May-2006


reply by the author on 07-May-2006
    channeled, once again thank you for the review, glad you like this one, take care and as always cheers... LvO
Comment from Leighann


This is very nice - I really like your composition in this one. Really nice detail and the eye is very, very nice. Excellent work.

Leighann

 Comment Written 07-May-2006


reply by the author on 07-May-2006
    Leighann, thanks you for your time and the review, take care and cheers.. LvO
Comment from cool.pix


This is nice more of an abstract picture though. The use of the pen and the ink is nice and the details on the ostrich are ok. Thanks for sharing this.

 Comment Written 07-May-2006


reply by the author on 07-May-2006
    cool.pix, thnaks you for your time and for writing the review, much appreciated by me, take care and cheers... LvO
Comment from faisoft


This painting is really eye catchy. Color contrast of black and white is nice. The shadowing is OK. Keep it up, my friend. Nice work. Cheers :-) faisoft

 Comment Written 06-May-2006


reply by the author on 06-May-2006
    faisoft, thanks for the time and the review, much appreciated by me... cheers... LvO
Comment from countryboytexas


Your work is always amazing and very well done this piece looks like you didn't apply yourself but I know the wonderful work you can do thanks for sharing hope to see more real soon thanks

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 Comment Written 06-May-2006


reply by the author on 07-May-2006
    countryboytexas, thanks for the time and the review, this one is just try to do a little less and still, getting the image to project, especially the eye.. take care.. Cheers...LvO