Comment from RuJPmore
Obviously, an alcohol inspired fight by this two dirty birds over a lady bird. You can tell these two enjoy mixing it up, even if they didn't have a lady bird to do it over. So likely they'd find another excuse if she wasn't there. Thank you for sharing!

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 Comment Written 29-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016

lol. thanks for the great review.

reply by RuJPmore on 30-Dec-2016

your welcome

Comment from shore1inspire.
a great one, MKFlood.
as I like how fast you made the short bird as the angry one gets madder. :-)
as the girl has her mouth wide open not expecting this , go figure. :-)
as usual your characters are great and hope you are working on that video. but you must be very busy. great job. always,
ron

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 Comment Written 29-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016

yeppers this is segment for the one I'm doing for Bryan Taylor on the fanmusic side.lol. thanks for the great review.

reply by shore1inspire. on 30-Dec-2016

Hi MKFlood,
I Guess it will be under his name with some credit to you. ?
as I hope you get a copy and be able to let others see the work.
your welcome.
always,
ron