Comment from dodgement
Its looks fine from a distance. You have her eyes perfect. But where I have marked, They look like Warts. I think her arm and hand require a little more work It is too thin & doll like. The flowers require attention. I like your phantom & background.

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 Comment Written 20-Sep-2010

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010

Thank you very much for letting me know. I had accidentally posted a earlier version in work. These warts were a slip of my brush wile I was shading. I have it changed against the final version. I am sorry but I don't agree about the arm. She is a friend of mine, a singer/dancer. She is five feet 8 inches, 105 pound. I think I came pretty close to reality. I can't measure her right now but will do soon as possible. I'll work on it. I just looked at myself and think the relation face arm is about right. But that doesn't mean much since I'm not quite as big as her and a different type.

Comment from andylouviere
I lik ethe good vrs evil look here. She is so beautiful then behind her is almost death looking at her. Its beautiful and dark at the same time. I really like it. Great concept. I love the strokes

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2010

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010

Thank you, I appreciate your kind review.

Comment from jbsteno
Love this. Caught my attention straightaway. Superb composition. Your technique is very good. Detail and colours are great. Really nice job. Well done.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2010

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010

Thank you for your encouraging review.