Comment from Linda Engel
Excellent. You will have a good following on Fan Story with this subject matter in poem form. I'm on Fan Story, also. Beautiful coloring and shadowing. Subject true to the theme. Well proportioned and balanced. Very well drawn.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thank you very much for the rating and kind words of encouragement.

Comment from avmurray
I have not seen the first one of these three, but I like very much the idea of doing three with a story attached. The story about the Maid is quite intriguing, and I think this is also well shown in your art work.

I especially like the all black background, and also how the face is standing out so well lit. It is almost like her face is shining from some power within. This is also done paying very good attention to details, and with fine and accurate lines and shapes.

I also like very much the very tight framing and how you included a bit of the arm and hand. It is a very fine flow and balance in this graphite drawing, and the coloration is just perfect. Indeed a well crafted work of art.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thanks

reply by avmurray on 26-Jun-2016

You are more than welcome.

Comment from Joelgraphuchin
A beautiful and very expressive drawing! Face and hand texture is very clear. Human anatomy is proportional. Contrast of dark and bright is enjoyable.

Well done and thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 26-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thanks Joel

Comment from Dick Lee Shia
A bonus rating for overall composition!
An interesting initial impact.
Creative concept. Innovative approach. Imaginative presentation. I love the uplight illuminating effect!
An impressive artwork rendition. Colorful creation with excellent strokes & textures. Good compositional style. Great overall impact! Thanks for sharing...

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thank you very much Dick. I am honoured! R

Comment from memephotos
Story informative .
Dramatic view .
Medium pencil & colour pencils good .
Detail ,shadow and light on skin is good . pose is effective adds depth to view .Head dress nice outline and effect .
A impressive talent & as I said a dramatic view in a good way thanks

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 Comment Written 26-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thanks. R

reply by memephotos on 27-Jun-2016

your welcome