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the book shows pointillism in its diversity.

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Comment from Skyangel02


The drawing is another high quality work which has obviously taken a lot of time and patience. The foal is adorable. He looks so cute snuggling up to his mother.
Beautiful work.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
    skyangel102,

    sorry for the late response.

    Thank you again for your time in looking and writing your critique of my drawing it is very much appreciated on all counts.
    Have great weekend,
    Cheers!!
    Lucien
Comment from M. Celeste


Beautiful job. Love the technique and how you show detail in the hair and muscle. Really like the warm look on the colt. Job well done!

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
    M.Celeste,

    Yes, I like the technique, and the results in created in this drawing.
    The challenge was the fore-shorting and the cross over look of the legs on this was a little bit of a challenge, in getting the composition the way I wanted. I like the colors and the earth tone with the blues, the combination add depth and perspective to me.
    But I liked the results.

    Thank you for your time in looking and writing your critique of my drawing it is very much appreciated on all counts.
    Have great weekend,
    Cheers!!
    Lucien
Comment from crivicic


This is a labour of love for sure, it must have taken a lot of your time but your effort in my opinion is rewarded. Wonderful work capturing a warm and tender moment. Yes you duplicated the moment well so congratulations.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
    crivicic,

    yes, I like the technique, and the results in created in this drawing.
    The challenge was the fore-shorting and the cross over look of the legs on this was a little bit of a challenge, in getting the composition the way I wanted. I like the colors and the earth tone with the blues, the combination add depth and perspective to me.
    But I liked the results.

    Thank you for your time in looking and writing your critique of my drawing it is very much appreciated on all counts.
    Have great weekend,
    Cheers!!
    Lucien
reply by crivicic on 30-Aug-2013
    Well you did a great job and yeah the reward is it paid off. YwBtw :) Ty Likewise.
Comment from Doris1022


that is really good I think I like the bison the best but the colt is really cute and your dots are very well placed for shading and light.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
    Doris1022,

    I think it turned out as I wanted, different then the Bison, but still works for me.

    The challenge was the fore-shorting and the cross over look of the legs on this was a little bit of a challenge, in getting the composition the way I wanted. I like the colors and the earth tone with the blues, the combination add depth and perspective to me.
    But I liked the results.

    Thank you for your time in looking and writing your critique of my drawing it is very much appreciated on all counts.
    Have great weekend,
    Cheers!!
    Lucien
Comment from Linda


Stunning artwork. Love the pointillism technique - it gives it a beautiful natural 3D affect. Great colours. Love the expression on the foal. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
    linda,

    you are welcome.
    The fore-shorting and the cross over look of the legs on this was a little bit of a challenge, in getting the composition the way I wanted. I like the colors and the earth tone with the blues, the combination add depth and perspective to me.
    But I liked the results.

    Thank you for your time in looking and writing your critique of my drawing it is very much appreciated on all counts.
    Have great weekend,
    Cheers!!
    Lucien
Comment from martin smith images


I'm not an art critic but this is a beautiful composition and I can see and appreciate the work that has gone into it. Really nice job. well done

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    martin,

    the fore-shorting and the cross over look of the legs on this was a little bit of a challenge, in getting the composition the way I wanted. I like the colors and the earth tone with the blues, the combination add depth and perspective to me.
    but I liked the results.

    thank you for your time in looking and writing your critique of my drawing it is very much appreciated on all counts.
    have great weekend,
    Cheers!!
    Lucien

Comment from soulfeeder


Artistic angle, I like the way you've drawn the face and showing the expression of the eyes of the colt, seeking refuge and protection, from Mom. This is such a warm scene, so relaxing . Artist Notes is informative.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    soulfeeder,

    the fore-shorting and the cross over look of the legs on this was a little bit of a challenge, in getting the composition the way I wanted.
    But I liked the results.

    Once again, thank you for your time in looking and writing your critique of my drawing it is very much appreciated on all counts.
    Have great weekend,
    Cheers!!
    Lucien

Comment from Chris1234


Initial impact okay.
The animal seems to be out of proportion.
Lights and shadows a bit off.
Also very grainy.
Sorry.

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 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    Chris1234,
    not sure where grainy come in, but okay,
    the fore-shorting and the cross over look of the legs on this was a little bit of a challenge, in getting the composition the way I wanted. .
    But I liked the results.

    Thank you for your time in looking and writing your critique of my drawing it is very much appreciated on all counts.
    Have great weekend,
    Cheers!!
    Lucien

Comment from wrjart


Very nice drawing which captures a very tender moment. The drawing is well framed using earth tone colors set against a white background. Again, excellent work.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    wrjart,

    and I too like the colors, the fore-shorting and the cross over look of the legs on this was a little bit of a challenge, in getting the composition the way I wanted. .
    But I liked the results.

    Once again, thank you for your time in looking and writing your critique of my drawing it is very much appreciated on all counts.
    Have great weekend,
    Cheers!!
    Lucien

Comment from Levon7


I like the colors of this. I like the babies head, drawn well. I appreciate the pointillism method. Hard work. But somehow the legs are mixed up. I'm sorry I can't see it right. It still has a nice composition.
Natalie

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    Natalie,
    the fore-shorting and the cross over look of the legs on this was a little bit of a challenge, in getting the composition the way I wanted. And I too like the colors.
    But I liked the results.

    Once again, thank you for your time in looking and writing your critique of my drawing it is very much appreciated on all counts.
    Have great weekend,
    Cheers!!
    Lucien