Mr. Singer
A singer sewing machine55 total reviews
Comment from steve's lot
really good story and nice image.
like the way you've softened the edged and the daetail and clor is good.
this would make a nice b/w image to make it look like an old phot
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2010
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really good story and nice image.
like the way you've softened the edged and the daetail and clor is good.
this would make a nice b/w image to make it look like an old phot
Comment Written 25-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2010
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Thank you very much
Comment from wildfangsdigitalart
Wonderful photo . Very classic shot love the old sewing machine, color and matte.
Color- sepia
Lighting
Focus
Balance
Inital impact
History / story telling
All add up to 5
Wonderful job on a great photo.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2010
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Wonderful photo . Very classic shot love the old sewing machine, color and matte.
Color- sepia
Lighting
Focus
Balance
Inital impact
History / story telling
All add up to 5
Wonderful job on a great photo.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2010
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Thank you very much
Comment from RevDon
Initial impact, this picture looks so familiar to me. My mom had one for so many years. They really were a fine machine, built to last several life times. Lighting is good. Action, waiting to be used. Singer Machine presentation. Color harmony is good. Center of interest is the machine. Cropping is good. Focus is sharp. Depth of field is not in effect here.
May I give you a recommendation. Go and edit you story. When text is transferred into FAR, it does not do a perfect job. For example, " marks are turned to garbage. Find you posted work on FAR. At the bottom or top there is a tab saying edit. Click on that and then correct your text. Then save at the bottom and you are done.
Good composition and concept. Loved the notes.
Story telling is in the title and artist?s notes.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2010
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Initial impact, this picture looks so familiar to me. My mom had one for so many years. They really were a fine machine, built to last several life times. Lighting is good. Action, waiting to be used. Singer Machine presentation. Color harmony is good. Center of interest is the machine. Cropping is good. Focus is sharp. Depth of field is not in effect here.
May I give you a recommendation. Go and edit you story. When text is transferred into FAR, it does not do a perfect job. For example, " marks are turned to garbage. Find you posted work on FAR. At the bottom or top there is a tab saying edit. Click on that and then correct your text. Then save at the bottom and you are done.
Good composition and concept. Loved the notes.
Story telling is in the title and artist?s notes.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2010
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Thank you very much, also for the advise
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You are welcome.
Don
Comment from angel4451
i enjoyed reading your story on this. I think the vignette you added works nicely, as it draws you in, to the singer. Even without your story, this tells a story all by itself. Good luck with the contest. Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2010
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i enjoyed reading your story on this. I think the vignette you added works nicely, as it draws you in, to the singer. Even without your story, this tells a story all by itself. Good luck with the contest. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2010
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Thank you very much
Comment from benkolo
The composition works well. The focus is very good, sharp and shows great detail. The lighting and colour are very good and it has very good impact and centre of interest.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2010
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The composition works well. The focus is very good, sharp and shows great detail. The lighting and colour are very good and it has very good impact and centre of interest.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2010
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Thank you very much
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You're welcome