Pen and ink Pointillism II
Viewing comments for Intro "Princess"these are drawing created by hand using the ink
75 total reviews
Comment from Wirlwind
This really caught my eye since I am a real lover of the Shepherd ! She
is gorgeous no doubt, but to look real close the eye appears to be
looking off the side instead of straight ahead and the toungue appears
to thick at its base bottom right. Its formation appears stiff and doesn't flow like I am use to seeing. Also her teeth appear flat and lack
definition. The line on the canvas is distracting and most certainly
does not belong perhaps you forgot to erase it. Hate to go on but
even her neck doesn't appear right---it looks bulky and doesn't flow into
the jaw line. It is good but really needs correction for this princess to
represent the royalty it deserves. Please do be offenced, this is indeed
what I see.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2006
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This really caught my eye since I am a real lover of the Shepherd ! She
is gorgeous no doubt, but to look real close the eye appears to be
looking off the side instead of straight ahead and the toungue appears
to thick at its base bottom right. Its formation appears stiff and doesn't flow like I am use to seeing. Also her teeth appear flat and lack
definition. The line on the canvas is distracting and most certainly
does not belong perhaps you forgot to erase it. Hate to go on but
even her neck doesn't appear right---it looks bulky and doesn't flow into
the jaw line. It is good but really needs correction for this princess to
represent the royalty it deserves. Please do be offenced, this is indeed
what I see.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2006
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2006
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Wirlwind, first off, I'm not offended, secondly, thank you for taking the time and interest to review my artwork... thirdly, I draw what I see and unfortunately even dogs of the same breed; same as people are slightly different. The line is crease in the paper, an imperfection there as it were? take care and cheers? LvO
Comment from Dazzleme
Nicley done with the pen and ink here. Your technique has worked well here. Great detail and wonderful composition here. You are a very talented artist for creating these wonderful pen and ink drawings. Nice presentaiton here.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2006
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Nicley done with the pen and ink here. Your technique has worked well here. Great detail and wonderful composition here. You are a very talented artist for creating these wonderful pen and ink drawings. Nice presentaiton here.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2006
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2006
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Dazzleme, thanks for the continued support, pleased you like this drawing... take care and as always cheers... LvO
Comment from Dark Duck
Very nice pointalism. What a great piece you have created here. The composition that you have used is very good, the use of color and contrast is consistent and good, the use of space is good. Thanks for sharing your work. Marti
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2006
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Very nice pointalism. What a great piece you have created here. The composition that you have used is very good, the use of color and contrast is consistent and good, the use of space is good. Thanks for sharing your work. Marti
Comment Written 10-Jul-2006
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2006
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Marti, thank you for the time and the review, really appreciated by me... take care and cheers... LvO
Comment from Daniel Farthing
I like the dog. I like the detail and the lighting on this one. This is very well done. I like what you did here. Thanks ofr shairng your workw ith us.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2006
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I like the dog. I like the detail and the lighting on this one. This is very well done. I like what you did here. Thanks ofr shairng your workw ith us.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2006
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2006
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scarman1313, thank you for the time and the review, mich appreciated, take care & cheers... LvO
Comment from mamre01
I think it's raining cats and dogs from the points of your pens. the detail here again is breathtaking and wonderful. I love the eyes of the dog.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2006
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I think it's raining cats and dogs from the points of your pens. the detail here again is breathtaking and wonderful. I love the eyes of the dog.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2006
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2006
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mamre, thanks a million for the compliments, pleased you like her as well, cheers... LvO
Comment from veron.n
this is very nicely done, i like it, keep up the good work, thank you for sharing this one with us,,,,,,,,,,,good luck,,,,,,,,
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2006
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this is very nicely done, i like it, keep up the good work, thank you for sharing this one with us,,,,,,,,,,,good luck,,,,,,,,
Comment Written 10-Jul-2006
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2006
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vernon.n, once again thank you for your time and the review, and support,
take care and cheers... LvO
Comment from linda5
this is beautiful, i do not know anything about the method you used to do this, but it is really stunning and is so life like. well done and thanks for sharing your wonderful art.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2006
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this is beautiful, i do not know anything about the method you used to do this, but it is really stunning and is so life like. well done and thanks for sharing your wonderful art.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2006
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2006
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linda5, thank you for the review... have great day... the method is that you apply each dot by hand to create the drawing... LvO
Comment from hopeart
YOu really are using this technique with great command and skill. I think that overall this is a well done image. Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing more.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2006
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YOu really are using this technique with great command and skill. I think that overall this is a well done image. Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing more.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2006
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2006
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Hopeart, thank you for the kind comments, there will be others promise... take care... LvO
Comment from faisoft
This dog drawing has a lot of details on it. The shadowing contrast is nicely done. The lighting is well balanced. You have done a great job putting everything together. Excellent job.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2006
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This dog drawing has a lot of details on it. The shadowing contrast is nicely done. The lighting is well balanced. You have done a great job putting everything together. Excellent job.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2006
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2006
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faisoft, thank you for the review, appreciate you taking the time.. take care... LvO
Comment from Marie Strydom
Still a good one, the detailis there ail and the way th you have used detail, makes it that more speciail, well done. Marie
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2006
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Still a good one, the detailis there ail and the way th you have used detail, makes it that more speciail, well done. Marie
Comment Written 16-Jan-2006
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2006
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Marie, thank you for taking the time to the review my work, I really appreciate it,
take care... LvO