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Comment from Diamondeyes
Excellent! Lucien, your color choice on this is perfect, grabs the viewer and makes you want to read it. I really like your choice of font on this. Excellent presentation! Great job. Thank you so much for sharing this.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2008
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Excellent! Lucien, your color choice on this is perfect, grabs the viewer and makes you want to read it. I really like your choice of font on this. Excellent presentation! Great job. Thank you so much for sharing this.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2008
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Diamondeyes,
thanks, you glad you like this one and that it gradded you as it was intended to do.
appreciate your time in doing the review.
Cheers!
Lucien
Comment from Countrygirl
This certainly would catch the eye and make the recipient read the announcement.Really well presented and great colors.I have thought of you lately as I try to convince my grand daughters boy friend to get deeper into his art.He is fantastic with the pencil.He has had problems with school work all of his life but put an artist tablet in his hand and he says every thing he would ever need to say.He has a lot of work that starts as a doodle of sorts but turns into a beautiful thing.He has been looked at by tatoo artists for design but I think he can go bigger and better than that ! He rarely works with people but he did one of my 4 yr old Grandson that is awesome.I only wish I knew where to point him to get more from his abilities.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2008
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This certainly would catch the eye and make the recipient read the announcement.Really well presented and great colors.I have thought of you lately as I try to convince my grand daughters boy friend to get deeper into his art.He is fantastic with the pencil.He has had problems with school work all of his life but put an artist tablet in his hand and he says every thing he would ever need to say.He has a lot of work that starts as a doodle of sorts but turns into a beautiful thing.He has been looked at by tatoo artists for design but I think he can go bigger and better than that ! He rarely works with people but he did one of my 4 yr old Grandson that is awesome.I only wish I knew where to point him to get more from his abilities.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2008
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Countrygirl,
thank you for teh time and the review. I have sent you a private message with some ideas.
hope they help. take care and cheers!
LvO
Comment from Heartfelt Annie
You certainly have the creative edge! Right away you read From The Depths and the font you chose has the eeerrriiieee feeling to it. You have the moon so there's no question which way you are going. The different hues of blue are pleasing and denoting depth, I think. Love the little fish with his bubbles and I think it's an octupus? Interesting how you have the tentacles in full interest of the sphere...plant inside? Can't tell from this pic. Very cool! Annie
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2008
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You certainly have the creative edge! Right away you read From The Depths and the font you chose has the eeerrriiieee feeling to it. You have the moon so there's no question which way you are going. The different hues of blue are pleasing and denoting depth, I think. Love the little fish with his bubbles and I think it's an octupus? Interesting how you have the tentacles in full interest of the sphere...plant inside? Can't tell from this pic. Very cool! Annie
Comment Written 12-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2008
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Annie,
The sphere is holding the logo, the birth of the idea, the tentacles are part of the brain where the idea "From the Depths" sprang and they are holding up for all to see. The rest represents the depths of the ocean, the brain and the universe (space).
Thanks for the review, I hope my explanations makes looking at the image even more interesting.
Have a great day and cheers!
Lucien
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Ahhhhh sooooo. ok, I understand now. Sometimes we can "see" but it's not always what the artist "sees". Thanks for the explanation. Annie
Comment from barka
I like the very glowing blue color, as it is vivid and has a powerful expression. The overall view never really appeals to me. I can't tell you what I miss. But I can tell that you have put a lot of time and energy in to it.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2008
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I like the very glowing blue color, as it is vivid and has a powerful expression. The overall view never really appeals to me. I can't tell you what I miss. But I can tell that you have put a lot of time and energy in to it.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2008
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barka,
not sure what you were looking for, so I cannot tell you what you missed either.
thanks for the review.
Cheers!
Lucien
Comment from STICKMANART
hi there Lvo!
this seem like a good design the composition seems ok, but not to kne on the colours, think a more veared colour palete is need, it sem a little limited, sorry!
Thanks¬!
TY!
:)
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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2008
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hi there Lvo!
this seem like a good design the composition seems ok, but not to kne on the colours, think a more veared colour palete is need, it sem a little limited, sorry!
Thanks¬!
TY!
:)
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2008
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Dude,
you got to be kidding! and then some stuff I can not say here, anyway... thanks for the review.
Cheers!
Lucien
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sorry, just been honest ,hope didnt effecn you!!
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nope just having some fun. you can think what every you want, me I know what's good and what's not..scary but true... thanks again...
Cheers!
Lucien
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lol
Comment from lilscoupe00
well this is definitly very very creative. The colors are great the the blues appear to be neon. Very interesting piece to look at.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2008
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well this is definitly very very creative. The colors are great the the blues appear to be neon. Very interesting piece to look at.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2008
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lilscoupe00,
thank you for your time and the review, appreciate the effort you took to do both things.
Cheers!
Lucien
Comment from StRyCh9
Very eyecatching image Lucien. I enjoyed the colors that you presented and liked that you included a bit of red, the all important marketeers attraction tool. Your work on lighting is excellent and the detail good. Its personal, but I think your selection of fonts is a bit old hat and the moon (maybe necessary to depict space?) competes for attention with the central orb. Still doesnt detract from your artwork being excellent. Keep it coming, looking forward to seeing more!
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2008
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Very eyecatching image Lucien. I enjoyed the colors that you presented and liked that you included a bit of red, the all important marketeers attraction tool. Your work on lighting is excellent and the detail good. Its personal, but I think your selection of fonts is a bit old hat and the moon (maybe necessary to depict space?) competes for attention with the central orb. Still doesnt detract from your artwork being excellent. Keep it coming, looking forward to seeing more!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2008
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StRyCh9,
Idea behind the card was from the depths of the ocean, the bottom of the card...
next from the depths of the human mind, the brains morphed into the tenticales, cradling the orb which shows the birth of SSP (their symbol) and then from the depths outer space, the planet and star in the upper corner. the idea was for the eye to travel back and forth throught the image having the orb be the focal point where everything comes back to teh center, including the viewers eye.
anyway, more then you wanted to know I'm sure! thanks for the review.
Cheers!
Lucien
Comment from Snopaw
Oh Lucien, you are too much. Yo'll get that Web site out there one way or the other. I like this one better, it is much easier to read. Really a fun design, the Seamonster grabs your attention right off.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2008
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Oh Lucien, you are too much. Yo'll get that Web site out there one way or the other. I like this one better, it is much easier to read. Really a fun design, the Seamonster grabs your attention right off.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2008
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Snopaw,
I'm Shameless, and promoting is part of the way we get noticed and hopefully discovered. thank you for the review, and gald you like the image.. now aren't you the least bit curious about SSP?
Cheers (lol! snicker, snicker!)
LvO
Comment from Steve Edwards
This is great work Lucien! Great presentation. The colors are beautiful and enchanting. The light radiating from the center ball is wonderful. Great job.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2008
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This is great work Lucien! Great presentation. The colors are beautiful and enchanting. The light radiating from the center ball is wonderful. Great job.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2008
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Steve E.,
thanks for the great comments and glad this one caught your attention. take care and cheers!
Lucien
Comment from Creations by Suz
Very well done. I really apreciate your talent and the way you use it for advertiving. I did advertizing for the sheep and wool convention. and some of the suppliers and wool artists a few years ago. Put I only did a few 5 or so. This is very well layed out and eye catching. Thanks for sharing, suz
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2008
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Very well done. I really apreciate your talent and the way you use it for advertiving. I did advertizing for the sheep and wool convention. and some of the suppliers and wool artists a few years ago. Put I only did a few 5 or so. This is very well layed out and eye catching. Thanks for sharing, suz
Comment Written 11-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2008
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Suz,
as always thanks for the support and for having taken the time to look, and review my work. appreciate all the effort and the review.
Cheers!
Lucien