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series of works in watercolor and pencil

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Comment from PennyE


I admire your talent with the pencil. Very good composition and proportions of the facial features. The shading is also well exucuted. Perhaps just a hint of red on the lips to make it really pop. Just an idea. But it is really great pencil rendention.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2008


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2008
    thank you so much for your very kind and insightful review once again thank you
Comment from Rockdoc


Beautiful hair, glance, and use of light and shade to create depth and perspective. Excellent work and the overall presentation is great.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2008


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2008
    thank you so much for your very kind and great review once again thank you
Comment from jhillman


I like this drawing very much indeed. Everything is well placed within the frame and there is good detail. Lighting is skilfully handled and the workmanship and textures are very good.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2008


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2008
    thank you so much for your very kind and great review once again thank you
Comment from Steve Edwards


Hello jesuel. Hey this looks like Lauren Becall! Great job with this image. Wonderful detail in this. Contrast and shadowing is excellent. You are very talented at this. Thanks for posting!

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2008


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2008
    thank you so much for your very kind and generous review once again thank you
Comment from barka


This is a very sophisticated lady. She has a lot of character. Her hair is very appealing. The softness and the depths in your image is very captivating. Excellent job

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2008


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2008
    thank you so much for your very kind and generous review once again thank you
Comment from tamanmitu


I find this one of your best that I've viewed so far. The textures created by your line angles and shading has given a dramatic 3D effect. When can I meet this lady? Great job.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2008


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2008
    thank you so much for your very kind and complimentary review once again thank you
Comment from Good Everything


Good capture! Good image details.

Composition: Good;
Presentation: Good;
Color Harmony: Good;
Depth of Field / Focus: Good;
Technique: Good;
Lighting: Good;
Story Telling Ability: Good;
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2008


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2008
    thank you so much for your very kind and generous review once again thank you
Comment from smithj9


Reminds me of the long ago pin up girls. She has an aged time period feel to her. I liked the details show in this work. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2008


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2008
    thank you so much for your very kind and generous review once again thank you
Comment from FXFortune


Hi Again
Nice image here,jesuel
Good use of pencil?s
Nice use of shadow and detail
Good composition once again
Well done
Great work
FXF


 Comment Written 03-Apr-2008


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2008
    thank you so much for your very kind and generous review i am humbled once again thank you
Comment from BARRY S


Very well done...great pencil work....nice deep tones all round. This must have been from an older picture of her, she looks very serene

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2008


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2008
    thank you so much for your very kind and great review once again thank you