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Nude on Pier

pointillism drawing

32 total reviews 
Comment from arclight


I am a very big fan of pointillism (and Femjoy too). Has always been one of my favorite mediums. Ive practiced this same pic many times but surprisingly never in that medium. Thank you for sharing, it is beautiful work. Look forward to seeing more.

 Comment Written 07-May-2011


reply by the author on 07-May-2011
    arclight,
    thank you for the time, what do you thinks need improving?
    have great day, your time is appreciated...cheers!
    Lucien
reply by arclight on 07-May-2011
    Well Lucien, I went back and took time looking more at your piece. Regardless of having taken classes and studying many pieces of art, Id have to come to the conclusion as I always have. Pastel, water color and pointillism is not a medium where detail is the objective nor can it really be obtained. It is the mixture of color and mass, focal points, balance and light. I don't think someone of my small caliber could suggest changing a thing. I really and honestly enjoy your work and from my little knowledge thing you have hit all the points I could know to tell you. I could only hope to achieve the success that you have. If there were something I could say Id be so very willing to share with you, but I think if anything I could learn from you. So thank You.
reply by the author on 08-May-2011
    Yes, pointillism is impressionistic in style, where colors, shapes and textures are all created using single dots of color laid down by the artist by hand. The nude on the Pier was from a photo that the photographer, Stefan Soell, allowed me to use as inspiration for the piece. I am flattered by the kin words you have used to describe my work, you support in very much appreciated. Have a great day. cheers!!
Comment from Alex El


I know this photo by Stefan Soell. I was thinking of making a painting from this photo too... But I am not sure about the copyrights... Interesting style though...

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 Comment Written 29-Sep-2009


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2009
    alex El,
    thank you for the review, why the low rating? I am not understanding the reasons?
    appreciate your time and anticipatehearing from you with an explination .
    take care and cheers!
    lucien
reply by Alex El on 01-Oct-2009
    THe low rating because it is not your original artwork. You used a photo of someone else.
reply by Alex El on 01-Oct-2009
    Does Stefen Soell know that you used his photo?
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
    so you are basing your review on that one question and not on the actual value of the work?
    the answer is: yes, he gave me permission to use his photo's and if my artwork using his photos as insperation sell, he gets a commision.
    thanks for you conecrn about my well being, Cheers!
    Lucien
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
    it is my original art work, I drew it by hand every little dot.
    I used his photo as a guide, as insperation, just like using a live model, the only difference she is Gods original creation.
    thanks, Cheers!
    Lucien
reply by Alex El on 11-Oct-2009
    Hi Lucien, you are right. I am sorry that I downgraded your work just because it was made from a photo made by someone else. I was wrong. The thing is, that I also draw and paint nudes, but I always do it from life or from my own photos. Sometimes I see really good photos by others that inspire me, but I cannot use it without permission. I could ask for permission, like you did. Maybe this is the right way to deal with it. Thank you, and my apologies again. Alex.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2009
    No worries, I have done that as well, drawn from life and from my photo's but every so often a image is presented that inspires and so I just ask. Hell all they can say is no.
    take care and have a great day,
    Cheers!
    Lucien
Comment from Figureman


This is very effective and makes a thoroughly good image. You have captured the shape of the model so nicely without having to be vulgar. Lovely scene.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2009


reply by the author on 05-Aug-2009
    figureman,
    thank you for the time and the review, I appreciate you taking & making the to do both on this hand drawn pointillism image.
    Take care and have a great day, Cheers!
    Lucien
Comment from lornesjade


wow this is great. and your technique is amazing. The colours are well suited and the lighting is great as well. Keep up the good work

 Comment Written 22-May-2008


reply by the author on 22-May-2008
    lornesjade,
    thank you for having taken the time to look and then share with me your thoughts about this image. very much appreciated by me on all counts
    Take care and cheers!
    Lucien
Comment from PennyE


Very good. Did you count the dots? LOL You have done a lovely job with the formation of the backside. The only thing I really can see is that the legs are really long. But this is wonderful with just dots.

 Comment Written 22-May-2008


reply by the author on 22-May-2008
    PennyE,
    yes in this image and the angle her legs look long and she is a tall woman, the thing that is not as clear as I want in this image is where her feet start and her legs begin, but rest assure in real life, as you looks at the image they are there and differentiated. no I did not count the dots... but rest assurred there are a zillion of them. thanks for the look and the comments, I appreciate both.
    take care and cheers!
    Lucien
reply by PennyE on 23-May-2008
    You are welcome. Zillons huh your hand must have been cramping like crazy. LOL Beautiful job.
Comment from Joemc


Love the texture and the effect that you have achieved.
The colors are great.
I like the composition as well.
You are very talented.
Great job, Joe

 Comment Written 22-May-2008


reply by the author on 22-May-2008
    joemc,
    Thank you for having taken the time to look at and then review my work, I appreciate your time in doing both? take care and cheers!
    Lucien
Comment from mikesblender


Great use of color and curving lines.
I'm impressed at your ability to convey both depth and shadow using just dots. You've inspired me to try this technique myself!

 Comment Written 22-May-2008


reply by the author on 22-May-2008
    mikesblender,
    Fun to hear that what I have created has inspired someone else to try that same technique, good luck with it and have fun doing the work. Thank you for having taken the time to look at and then review my work, I appreciate your time? take care and cheers!
    Lucien

Comment from Gunner Smith


Impact 5

Composition 5

Exposure na

DOF na

Color 3

Creativity 4

Tech 4

My thought..Very nice image of this beautiful body. I belive it would have been a much stronger image without the real grainy effect also the color seems weak. But still a nice image. GS

 Comment Written 22-May-2008


reply by the author on 22-May-2008
    Gunner,
    this is the way it was drawn the technique is called pointillism and the dots are placed one by one by hand on the paper to create the drawing or image. (Look it up on the internet and you will see what I mean)
    Thanks for the time and the comments, appreciated by me on both counts... take care
    and cheers!
    Lucien
reply by Gunner Smith on 22-May-2008
    Yes I know that is a technique but it is one I'm not a fan of. Nice work though.
reply by the author on 22-May-2008
    thanks! too bad...
    cheers!
    Lucien
Comment from ChamitArt


yes, i know for a fact that this type of job leaves you in a meditative state, concentrated, inside your head, very nicely done, great composition, amazing technique

 Comment Written 22-May-2008


reply by the author on 22-May-2008
    ChamitArt,
    thank your for your time and then writing me with your thoughts about this image. I appreciate both efforts on you part, and your support of my work and me. take care and cheers!
    Lucien
Comment from chessmkr1


I like it Lucien. Nice color harmony. Excellent impact. Smoking hot female form. Looks like she's enjoying a beautiful day. I think the pointilism style here softens your perspective lending to the erotic feel of this, as does the fact that her whole body reaches from one side to the other. Very enjoyable to view.
Thanks.
Jim

 Comment Written 21-May-2008


reply by the author on 21-May-2008
    Jim,
    yo dude, thanks for having taken the time to look at this piece and then the nice comments in teh reviwe. pleased by the fact you like this, smoking hot female form. truly appreciated by me on all counts... as always take care and cheers!
    Luc