The Male Form
Viewing comments for Page 143 "Stretching Male Form"images I drew of the male form.
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Comment from torquise
This is such a cool image here, I think!. So much going on here, Love the amazing effect. Has a lovely feel to the topic. Perfect tones too.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2008
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This is such a cool image here, I think!. So much going on here, Love the amazing effect. Has a lovely feel to the topic. Perfect tones too.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2008
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torquise,
sorry for the delay in responding, thank you for the time and then the review, appreciated by me on all counts, have great day and cheers!
Lucien
Comment from ARTHOUND
THE ANTOMY OF THIS IT SEEM'S TO BE A BIT ELONGGATED EVEN THOUGH HE'S STRECHING THE TORSO IS STILL A WEE BIT TO LONG THE PORPORTION'S OF THE LEG'S ARE OF AS WELLTHE SHADING IS TO HEAVY AROUND THE LEG'S OTHER WISE THE SHADING IS REALLY WELL DONE ARTHOUND
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2008
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THE ANTOMY OF THIS IT SEEM'S TO BE A BIT ELONGGATED EVEN THOUGH HE'S STRECHING THE TORSO IS STILL A WEE BIT TO LONG THE PORPORTION'S OF THE LEG'S ARE OF AS WELLTHE SHADING IS TO HEAVY AROUND THE LEG'S OTHER WISE THE SHADING IS REALLY WELL DONE ARTHOUND
Comment Written 15-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2008
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Arthound,
yes the angle he was posing at was a little different then normal. thanks for the look and the review, appreciated by me on both counts... cheers!
Lucien
Comment from EAPhoto
This is a nice sketch of the human form. I think you could have added a bit more depth and detail to this, however, you did a nice job on representing your subject.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2008
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This is a nice sketch of the human form. I think you could have added a bit more depth and detail to this, however, you did a nice job on representing your subject.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2008
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EAPhoto,
Thank you for having taken the time to look and then write the review. the pose was on that the model could hold for a limited time. I appreciate your comments take care and cheers!
Lucien
Comment from wrhosie935
Another great anatomy lesson for us. Good job on the shadowing of the muscles and showing how the body reacts to stretching. Good show.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2008
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Another great anatomy lesson for us. Good job on the shadowing of the muscles and showing how the body reacts to stretching. Good show.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2008
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wrhosie935,
thank you for having taken the time to look and the comments in the review, appreciated by me, have great day Cheers!
Lucien
Comment from Paulisa
Excellent work. I like the short strokes, they really give energy to the piece. Good shading all around. I like the mirrored image in the background. Good detail and proportion.
Thank you for sharing this study in drawing the human body. I'm working on improving my skills in that area.
Paulisa
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2008
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Excellent work. I like the short strokes, they really give energy to the piece. Good shading all around. I like the mirrored image in the background. Good detail and proportion.
Thank you for sharing this study in drawing the human body. I'm working on improving my skills in that area.
Paulisa
Comment Written 14-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2008
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Paulisa,
thank you for havung taken the time to look and then write the review, appreciated by me on all counts. pleased you like it. pracatice make perfect as they say, so I practice all the time to get my drawings to look good, to be representative of the subject I am attempting to draw. good luck with you studies of the human body.
take care and cheers!
Lucien
Comment from jesuel
great study lucien i love how you bring the form out through your use of line and shading what a great piece i love it fine work here
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2008
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great study lucien i love how you bring the form out through your use of line and shading what a great piece i love it fine work here
Comment Written 14-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2008
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james,
thanks, please that you took the time to look and then write me with your thoughts on this rendering. appreciated, take care and cheers!
Lucien
Comment from Roger Hilleboe
Good study Lucien. A few more shadows and a few less lines would make it even stronger by giving it more volume. Nice work on the neck. Seems a bit rushed but that was probably your intent.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2008
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Good study Lucien. A few more shadows and a few less lines would make it even stronger by giving it more volume. Nice work on the neck. Seems a bit rushed but that was probably your intent.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2008
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Roger Hilleboe,
it is a drawing done of model, having them hold a pose like this is difficult, so yes you are a time restrant, but in there lies the challange, appreciated the review. take care and cheers!
Lucien
Comment from Symransdad1
Impact 5
Composition 5
Artistic impression 5
Detail 5
Though not an artist myself have love reviewing your work, its like having a masterclass.
Love the way you pay so much attention to detail and redraw to ensure it is correct.
Thanks for sharing this, bet there are loads of artists learning a great deal from you, Mark
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2008
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Impact 5
Composition 5
Artistic impression 5
Detail 5
Though not an artist myself have love reviewing your work, its like having a masterclass.
Love the way you pay so much attention to detail and redraw to ensure it is correct.
Thanks for sharing this, bet there are loads of artists learning a great deal from you, Mark
Comment Written 14-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2008
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Symransdad1,
thank you for the having taken the time to look at and then comment on this drawing. Regarding you last comments, very kind of you to say that and I hope so, take care and cheers!
Lucien
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My pleasure, Mark
Comment from tuckerkao
Very good shading processing applied to the portrait of the man with the nude body turn-outs. The line strokes drew in smoothly with the proper lighting.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2008
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Very good shading processing applied to the portrait of the man with the nude body turn-outs. The line strokes drew in smoothly with the proper lighting.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2008
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tuckerkao,
thank you for the commenst in the review, I appreciated your support, cheers!
Lucien
Comment from AlissaAnn
I like the use of short strokes in this, it really helps define the muscles and contours.
The body is a hard thing to draw and I think you did a good job with this.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2008
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I like the use of short strokes in this, it really helps define the muscles and contours.
The body is a hard thing to draw and I think you did a good job with this.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2008
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AlissaAnn,
Thank you for having taken the to look and then writing the review, appreciated by me on both counts, cheers!
Lucien