Reviews from

California Dreaming

All by hand pen and ink

15 total reviews 
Comment from buckeye


Very nice image you have created here. I like the reflections in the sunglasses. The details and the highlights are very well done. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
    Buckeye,
    Salutations, sorry about the long delay before responding, my computer went down, at least my internet connection side of it went down. Thnak you for the review . Glad you like this one, appreciate the time you spent and the comments in the review and the questions. Hope you are well, take care and cheers!
    Lucien
Comment from SERVINGWENCH


wow you are certainly apatient and extremely talented artist great title for a great picture the lighting and shadows are awesome

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
    Servingwench,
    Salutations, sorry about the long delay before responding, my computer went down, at least my internet connection side of it went down. And I have been really busy with my day job as well. Images done in stipple take usually days and days up to weeks complete depending on the size of the image, this one took like about 10 hours a over a couple of day. Glad you like this one, thank you for the review. I appreciate the time you spent and the comments in the review and the questions. Hope you are well, take care and cheers!
    Lucien
Comment from Nelia


Lucien, this has a very retro 1970's record cover look to it (the hairstyle and the speed in the reflection!!) - and the Momma and the Pappas California dreaming is absolutely spot on as a title - hey are you picking up habits from Dennis .he always uses song titles!! Back to this - what amazing patience (and endurance) to stipple an image like this, blooming brilliant! Great uses of highlights and shadows, particularly where her sunnies sit on her nose, her cheekbones and in the hair. Well done! How long would a creation like this take to finish?

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
    Nelia,
    Salutations, sorry about the long delay before responding, my computer went down, at least my internet connection side of it went down. And I have been really busy with my day job as well. I'm a design engineer for a US aerospace company, I work mostly with composite and plastic structures. Images like this one done in stipple take usually days and days up to weeks complete depending on the size of the image, this one took like about 10 hours a over a couple of day. Glad you like this one, appreciate the time you spent and the comments in the review and the questions. Thanks... Hope you are well, take care and cheers!
    Lucien
Comment from eyemagination


Ohhh my dear God! How tedious and difficult it must be to create something like this. I am absolutely in awe.

Excellent all around, specially given all the work you had to create this. May I ask how it takes you to draw something like that? Alex

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
    eyemagination,
    Salutations and good morning, at least for me its morning. depending on the size of the piece days, weeks, months... this one a several days. Just a quick note to say thank you for having taken the time to look at and then review this rendering. I appreciate both efforts on your part and I am pleased you like the image.
    Take care and have a great day... cheers!
    Lucien
Comment from catmal


really great image here lucien love the details and the very cheerful expression on her face ,,the larger version seems a little blurry but we get the idea great job on this

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
    Catmal,
    Salutations and good morning, at least for me its morning. it looked good when I resized for displaying here, I have found that sometimes the uploading does things.. . which I have not figured out how to correct for. Just a quick note to say thank you for having taken the time to look at and then review this rendering. I appreciate both efforts on your part and I am pleased you like the image.
    Take care and have a great day... cheers!
    Lucien
Comment from EAPhoto


I have reviewed this work based on the following criteria. Each category will receive zero, one half, or one full star. The total of all categories will be the rating assigned to your art work.

Visual Impact: 1
Color: 1
Lighting: 1
Technical Excellence: 1
Composition: 1
Wow Factor: 0

Nicely done!

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
    EAPhoto,
    Salutations and good morning, at least for me its morning. WOW a 0 on WOW factor, just the fact its all dots should have filled that spot with a 1. Just a quick note to say thank you for having taken the time to look at and then review this rendering. I appreciate both efforts on your part and I am pleased you like the image.
    Take care and have a great day... cheers!
    Lucien
Comment from jesuel


thats really cool i wish i could give you a six you certainly have earned it here really great piece of work fantastic great job

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
    Jesuel,
    Salutations and good morning, at least for me its morning. Wish you could too!Just a quick note to say thank you for having taken the time to look at and then review this rendering. I appreciate both efforts on your part and I am pleased you like the image.
    Take care and have a great day... cheers!
    Lucien

Comment from Anne


This is great the way you have done it. I like the way you used the space and the ay you drew this one. The detail and the way you did the hair are excellent. The reflections in the glasses are great. A wonderful work of art. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
    Anne,
    Salutations and good morning, at least for me its morning. Thank you, I'll need it! Just a quick note to say thank you for having taken the time to look at and then review this rendering. I appreciate both efforts on your part and I am pleased you like the image.
    Take care and have a great day... cheers!
    Lucien
Comment from Details


Great composition and execution. I love viewing this type of work - I just want to study and study it. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
    Deatails,
    Salutations and good morning, at least for me its morning. Look all you want, if you purchase a print you can hang it in your room and then really study it. Just a quick note to say thank you for having taken the time to look at and then review this rendering. I appreciate both efforts on your part and I am pleased you like the image.
    Take care and have a great day... cheers!
    Lucien
Comment from jamesnew9


Very retro... I really like it.. I think it may look even better if you added some hints of color to certain part, maybe the glasses.. also has very interesting cropping. Good impact.. nice one...

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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
    jamesnew9,
    Salutations and good morning, at least for me its morning. want to see this style in color need to look at my portfolio and other view images. like the frogs. Just a quick note to say thank you for having taken the time to look at and then review this rendering. I appreciate both efforts on your part and I am pleased you like the image.
    Take care and have a great day... cheers!
    Lucien