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Comment from Bluesavanagh
Detailed below is my review of your Mixed Media, as presented~
A composed design of the thought in mind of an event as we may or may not witness.
So if you have foreseen the future as it might be.~ what makes you believe it may be a melt down.~?/
Detailed below is my review of your Mixed Media, as presented~
~Initial impact 5
Composition of piece
~ Creativity of Presentation 5
~ Colour of Harmony 5
~ Centre of Interest 5
~ Technical excellence 5
~Technique 5
~Colour/contrast
~ Story telling ability 5
~ Lighting Management 5
Thank~you Jinni.~
Detailed below is my review of your Mixed Media, as presented~
~Initial impact 5
~Composition of piece 5.5
~ Creativity of Presentation 5
~ Colour of Harmony 5
~ Centre of Interest 5
~ Technical excellence 5
~Technique 5
~Colour/contrast6
~ Story telling ability 5
~ Lighting Management 5
Thank~you Jinni.~
~ Creativity of Presentation 5
~ Colour of Harmony 5
~ Centre of Interest 5
~ Technical excellence 5
~Technique 5
~Colour/contrast 5
~ Story telling ability 5
~ Lighting Management 5
Thank~you Jinni.~
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Detailed below is my review of your Mixed Media, as presented~
A composed design of the thought in mind of an event as we may or may not witness.
So if you have foreseen the future as it might be.~ what makes you believe it may be a melt down.~?/
Detailed below is my review of your Mixed Media, as presented~
~Initial impact 5
Composition of piece
~ Creativity of Presentation 5
~ Colour of Harmony 5
~ Centre of Interest 5
~ Technical excellence 5
~Technique 5
~Colour/contrast
~ Story telling ability 5
~ Lighting Management 5
Thank~you Jinni.~
Detailed below is my review of your Mixed Media, as presented~
~Initial impact 5
~Composition of piece 5.5
~ Creativity of Presentation 5
~ Colour of Harmony 5
~ Centre of Interest 5
~ Technical excellence 5
~Technique 5
~Colour/contrast6
~ Story telling ability 5
~ Lighting Management 5
Thank~you Jinni.~
~ Creativity of Presentation 5
~ Colour of Harmony 5
~ Centre of Interest 5
~ Technical excellence 5
~Technique 5
~Colour/contrast 5
~ Story telling ability 5
~ Lighting Management 5
Thank~you Jinni.~
Comment Written 11-Jul-2009
Comment from theteleport
I think this is an great piece, with vivid colors, but my suggestion is to work more with the eye form, as you can see I have tried to do. I hope to inspire you to give it a try to make this eye, more like an eye,, I have tried to draw it several times,,, but you ought to draw/make your own style of eye.. not so clear as mine, but not either so diffuse as yours..
Your image has great blue color and great orange/blue complimentary effect!
ANd I like the lighning!!
Thanks for sharing MoonWillow
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I think this is an great piece, with vivid colors, but my suggestion is to work more with the eye form, as you can see I have tried to do. I hope to inspire you to give it a try to make this eye, more like an eye,, I have tried to draw it several times,,, but you ought to draw/make your own style of eye.. not so clear as mine, but not either so diffuse as yours..
Your image has great blue color and great orange/blue complimentary effect!
ANd I like the lighning!!
Thanks for sharing MoonWillow
Comment Written 05-Jul-2009
Comment from jgrace
What a unique painting. The purpil in the center has an eerie look to it. I can see the look of fear. Great impact. Very expressive piece. Colors work really well to add lot of depth. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2009
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What a unique painting. The purpil in the center has an eerie look to it. I can see the look of fear. Great impact. Very expressive piece. Colors work really well to add lot of depth. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2009
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Thank you, Julie! :)
Comment from cleo85
That is not a very exiting trip into the future but it is an very expressive picture. Amazing what one can do with an freezer door. It needs just....a lot imagination and creativity and masterly use of the Mixed Media programs.
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That is not a very exiting trip into the future but it is an very expressive picture. Amazing what one can do with an freezer door. It needs just....a lot imagination and creativity and masterly use of the Mixed Media programs.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2009
Comment from Smurphgirl
This is a very good entry for this contest. I love the vivid blue and the detail of the eye is marvelous. Adding the blood red silhouette of the city with a bolt of lighting really pulls the viewer into the photograph. Very nice work.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2009
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This is a very good entry for this contest. I love the vivid blue and the detail of the eye is marvelous. Adding the blood red silhouette of the city with a bolt of lighting really pulls the viewer into the photograph. Very nice work.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2009
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I hope you got something for reviewing this, SG, as I didn't promote it and I think it already recieved it's 3 free reviews I don't know how that works, but I definitely appreciate your wonderful review and the time you took to give it. Thank you so much :)
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While points are great and come in handy, I don't pay much attention to them. If something catches my eye I will review it no matter what it offers.
Comment from Angelheart The First
Great impact Shawn,you really know how to get attention with your color choices.I also like that this is a very thought provoking piece.Great detail in the eye.
Best of luck to you in the contest!!
Angelheart :)
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2009
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Great impact Shawn,you really know how to get attention with your color choices.I also like that this is a very thought provoking piece.Great detail in the eye.
Best of luck to you in the contest!!
Angelheart :)
Comment Written 03-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2009
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Thank you so much for the review, Angel. I uploaded this mostly for the contest, so I didn't even promote it. I truly hope you received something for your comments. I don't know how that works unless you get in on the first three (free) reviews that FAR offers :)
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Yes Shawn,if you get in on the first 3 you get 5/27 if not you get 2/1.
I would have reviewed it anyway :)
Comment from LUIYI
Another great print,
The colors and the subject are very inviting
Very original and different
Excellent perspective
Thank you for sharing
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Another great print,
The colors and the subject are very inviting
Very original and different
Excellent perspective
Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 03-Jul-2009
Comment from Dimples
Love the effects, creativity and presentation, initial impact color and harmony great. I've been trying to work out how you have done this from a photo of a stainless steel freezer door. When it comes to mixed media I have no idea how you do this. Very nicely done.
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Love the effects, creativity and presentation, initial impact color and harmony great. I've been trying to work out how you have done this from a photo of a stainless steel freezer door. When it comes to mixed media I have no idea how you do this. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2009
Comment from 1phoenix2
your work tends to draw me in Moonshadow, it has a mesmorising quality and i wonder about the inspiration that drives a work such as this, well done, thankyou for sharing
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your work tends to draw me in Moonshadow, it has a mesmorising quality and i wonder about the inspiration that drives a work such as this, well done, thankyou for sharing
Comment Written 03-Jul-2009
