Comment from GaliaG
beautiful capture of the sun rays and a very nice poem
thanks a lot for the haiku poetry info

# Initial impact5
# Creativity of presentation5
# Color Harmony 5
# Center of Interest 5
# Technical Excellence 5
# Technique 5
# Story Telling Ability 5
# Lighting 5

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2009

Comment from ressie
Love the way the sky was photographed. The rays are an added touch to give it more impact.


initial impact - 5
creativity of presentation - 5
color harmony - 5
center of interest - 5
technical excellence - 5
lighting - 5

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2009

Comment from Tanner
The sky is just beautiful in this photograph. I love the sun rays coming down from behind the dark cloud with the little bits of blues and pinks. What I would suggest for the next time is to have something of interest in the foreground - a beautifully shaped tree or a small building, for example - off to either the right or the left of the foreground. Something of interest to frame that beautiful sky with. Something like this would have made this more than a 5 for me.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2009

Comment from elements
For someone who suffers from anxiety and depression has come up with a photo very appealing. I guess you can say where we are weak He is strong. God can work through our weaknesses to make something beautiful. I love the clouds and the sun beaming through and the almost silhouette of trees in the foreground. Keep up the great work!

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2009

Comment from heart4art
gorgeous all the way around. the sun rays are incredible and the silhouettes are great. your choice of font is good and simple. sometimes fonts overwhelm the message, yours does not. great initial impact and lasting attention ability.
thanks for sharing...eileen

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2009

Comment from jgrace
Love the message and your photo is wonderful. Like the light streaming down from the clouds as if to nourish the land and its occupants. Well focused and lighting is good. Enjoyed viewing it.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2009

Comment from shiloh106
Beautiful image. Initial impact is very high with those great sun rays slanting down. Color is very harmonious and pleasing to the eye. I really like your notes and the poem is great with this. Look forward to seeing more.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2009

Comment from donkeyoatey
I like the simple but elegant look of the poem. The colors and the sun rays are so appealing against the green of the trees. I would suggest cloning out the roof though. Donkeyoatey

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2009

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reply by Anonymous Member on 15-Aug-2009

Hi donkeyoatey, Thanks for the wonderful review! The roof was bothering me too so thanks for the little push for me to clone over it. It's important to notice every little flaw that distracts. Thanks, Helvi :o)

reply by donkeyoatey on 15-Aug-2009

Now it is perfect! I changed my rating. Donkeyoatey

Comment from jennifermuller
i really like your photo. and the added words. this would be great famed. this would make an awesome album cover. i notice a small building left bottom. thanks for sharing this. photoID

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2009

Comment from dargon1961
Wow. My first Japanese haiga. It work well. Excellent presentation. Good focus and lighting. Fabulous clarity. Great composition. Beautiful scene. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
Vernie

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 Comment Written 15-Aug-2009