Illustration of lemons
Pen & ink, & color pencil and13 total reviews
Comment from PoeticHeart35
Great loosely done drawing, I like the subject of the lemons however at first glance I wasn't quite sure what it was as it strikes like an abstract work really. It really seems a lesser quality than I see in your other work, however an inviting impact.
reply by the author on 28-May-2010
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Great loosely done drawing, I like the subject of the lemons however at first glance I wasn't quite sure what it was as it strikes like an abstract work really. It really seems a lesser quality than I see in your other work, however an inviting impact.
Comment Written 28-May-2010
reply by the author on 28-May-2010
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PoeticHeart35,
thank you for your time and comments.
Comment from Celia Claase
It does work ! I like the loose style of drawing. Excellent lines and shapes created. At a first glance I could not tell that it was a lemon, but I like your choice of colours and style very much.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2010
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It does work ! I like the loose style of drawing. Excellent lines and shapes created. At a first glance I could not tell that it was a lemon, but I like your choice of colours and style very much.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2010
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Celia Claase,
TYVM, very appreciative of you time and the comments in your review, it's a little abstracted image that's true, glad you like the style, TA!
Comment from lorac1
This watercolor is an unusual approach to a picture of lemons. Indeed the lemon is the center of interest, However, it does not look realistic, and it does not look abstract to me.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2010
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This watercolor is an unusual approach to a picture of lemons. Indeed the lemon is the center of interest, However, it does not look realistic, and it does not look abstract to me.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2010
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lorac 1,
TYVM, very appreciative of you time and the comments in your review. Abstracted is what it is to me, because it's one or the other, and all art is somewhat abstracted, know what I mean, TA!
Comment from jennifermuller
nice presentation. good initial impact. the texture of the lemons is apparent in this drawing. good lines, color and depth . nice work. photoid61
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2010
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nice presentation. good initial impact. the texture of the lemons is apparent in this drawing. good lines, color and depth . nice work. photoid61
Comment Written 12-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2010
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photoID61,
TYVM, very appreciative of you time and the comments in your review. pleased you like my efforts in this style, TA!
Comment from AlteredImage
I love the simplicity and the colors are perfect. I think you did a great job. It was a good decision to have the large lemon as center of interest.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2010
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I love the simplicity and the colors are perfect. I think you did a great job. It was a good decision to have the large lemon as center of interest.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2010
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AleredImage,
TYVM, very appreciative of you time and the comments in your review. pleased you like the style it was created in, TA!
Comment from Conception's Dawn
You know what it does work! After reading your description I can definitely see what you were trying to accomplish here! Very nice, I do think the detail could have been captured a little better. But I can see what you were trying. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2010
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You know what it does work! After reading your description I can definitely see what you were trying to accomplish here! Very nice, I do think the detail could have been captured a little better. But I can see what you were trying. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2010
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Conception's Dawn,
TYVM, very appreciative of you time and the comments in your review. Details captured better, like in the ???, would like more input. TA!
Comment from jerry s.
presented fairly well,but main figure is not defined as well as you could.design is busy,maybe less would make main character stand out more.brighter flashes of yellow might have defined the presentation and taken it to another level
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2010
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presented fairly well,but main figure is not defined as well as you could.design is busy,maybe less would make main character stand out more.brighter flashes of yellow might have defined the presentation and taken it to another level
Comment Written 12-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2010
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jerry s.,
TYVM, very appreciative of you time and the comments in your review, may not agree with them all, but TA!
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that's why we are here...jerry
Comment from RSMITH
I like it, simply works. Good interesting lines and center of focus. Great composition and shading to create depth. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2010
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I like it, simply works. Good interesting lines and center of focus. Great composition and shading to create depth. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2010
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RSMITH,
luck I'm looking for.
TYVM, very appreciative of you time and the comments in your review.
Comment from seshadri_sreenivasan
The illustration may be complete , may be with clearer rendering of the tree. A couple of lemons would be required. In this case the leaves, buds and the lemons appear to be of same size.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2010
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The illustration may be complete , may be with clearer rendering of the tree. A couple of lemons would be required. In this case the leaves, buds and the lemons appear to be of same size.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2010
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S-S,
so you think it lacks depth. perspective?
TYVM, very appreciative of you time and the comments in your review.
Comment from kanagraj
Good attempet still highlight needed. and some where the sketch might need clean. anyway thisis some kind of basic style. composing ok impact ok story telling ok over all good.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2010
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Good attempet still highlight needed. and some where the sketch might need clean. anyway thisis some kind of basic style. composing ok impact ok story telling ok over all good.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2010
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Kanagraj,
the style is the style.
TYVM, very appreciative of you time and the comments in your review, may not agree with them all, but TA!