Comment from sandiebolger
Lovely portrait shot, your daughter has beautiful eyes and hair. Nice angle, light and focus. Good depth of field, thanks for sharing, I think she will break a few hearts when she is older.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2010

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010

thank you so much

Comment from ambayer
Great expression and composition. I would have enhanced the saturation to bring out the colors and grain in the wood and give her face a little more color. I would also edit out the blue knee on the far left of the picture.

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 Comment Written 01-Nov-2010

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010

thank you

Comment from GaliaG
love her beautiful blue eyes and the dreaming expression on her face

excellent focus, compositon, presentaiotn and initial impact

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2010

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010

thank you so much

Comment from mamamary
This looks like one unhappy girl. She seems tired and ready for the photo shoot to be over. The color is nice and solid. The framing is very well done. The girl is beautiful, even though she looks miserable.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010

thank you so much

Comment from dodgement
You ought to have that nail out Willie, The kids will catch themselves on it. Your grand-daughter has a look of: Hurry up. Great frame good skin tones Great focus.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010

thank you so much

Comment from raineyknightartwork
Initial Perception: She looks tired
Emotionally Charged: yes
Title: fitting
Artist Notes: helpful and detailed
Creativity: dynamic
Color Harmony: elaborate
Center of Interest: those blue eyes and her expression
Technique (category): Correct
Story Telling Ability: Yes
What Works Well? Depth of field, focus, colors, and subject
Comments: nice work
Star Rating: 5
Per site scale (6=Exceptional, 5.5=Professional, 5=Expert (no revisions necessary) 4.5=Above Average, 4=Average)

Thank you for sharing. Rainey

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010

thank you so much

reply by raineyknightartwork on 31-Oct-2010

You are welcome and I hope you have a great day. Rainey

Comment from rondasue123
Cute Photo. The wood framing is perfect. Her beautiful Blue eyes and speckled skin are beautiful. Many thoughts from that face. Hurry up Grandma another PHOTO>>> Enjoyed you picture. Thank you

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010

thank you so much.

Comment from einyv
Initial impact 5
story telling ability 5
color harmony 5
technical ability 5
center of interest 5
Composition 5
lighting 5
focus 5
You captured a wonderful shot. The wood is a perfect frame for this. The pose is nice too. Captured the emotions in your granddaughters eyes very nicely.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010

thank you so much

Comment from tedmunro
what happened to the bright smile. it must have been her brother making her smile. shes still a beauty though. and this is a very nice and clear photo of her. ty for sharing...ted

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010

thank you so much

Comment from amandah
What a beautiful girl. She has such wonderful skin that you capture well here. The natural wood surrounding her has such a nice feel to it. The only thing I would address in the image is the elbow pointing directly at the camera, it is a little distracting to the eye. The catch light in her eyes is perfect and her hair is a wonderful golden colour and hasn't blown out with the flash.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2010

thanks