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This book is of children portraits and expressions

62 total reviews 
Comment from dodgement


This is a really good action shot. Excellent focus, Good skin tones. I think you should do well in the contest. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2010
    thank you
Comment from avmurray


Fantastic portrait. It is original because something is actually happening here. The boy is drinking. He has lovely brown eyes and the water is so "visible". Well done.

I have looked at:
Initial impact
Story telling ability
Light and shade
Color
Texture
Technique
Composition
Focal point
Framing
Originality
All worth 5.5 stars.


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 Comment Written 19-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2010
    thanks again